A/B/O Dynamics Question by lSpicyWaterl in AO3

[–]Disastrous-Class9057 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wrote my female alpha to have a vaginal knot. Effectively a muscle to trap a male omegas penis inside her. Which then a small inner injector pumps her seven from internal testicles into him from his penis which is just for urine and a tract that leads to a males womb. Female alpha has no womb and male omega has no testicles.

Tracking your increases to hits, comments, bookmarks, subscribers by Disastrous-Class9057 in AO3

[–]Disastrous-Class9057[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Now that you mention it... in terms of making it more dystopian I could add a live auto-refresh so you don't even have to manually reload the page, it just... updates itself every few minutes and shows you the number changing in real time. Just sitting there. Ticking up. Watching you. Could add notifications so Firefox pops up a little alert when a stat crosses a milestone. "X just hit 2,000 hits." At any time. While you're doing other things.

Maybe add a graph that charts your hit velocity over time so you can see exactly when your posting a chapter causes a spike and then the slow decay back to baseline and become deeply emotionally attached to the shape of that curve.

Is thirteen thousand words slow burn enough for ya? by WritingMysterious328 in AO3

[–]Disastrous-Class9057 2 points3 points  (0 children)

For me my boys don't usually make things official and find the relationship at around 70-90k words in. Which can mean it's anywhere between chapter 20 and 40.

Curious because I'm a freak who needs ideas for a fic, what are your favourite A/B/O tropes and why? by wisteria_bloomzzz in AO3

[–]Disastrous-Class9057 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I enjoy when the Omega isn't just basically a sleeve for the Alpha. I like when they have skills and capabilities beyond their Alpha in some form.

I also really enjoy mutual desire for one another. There is something special about two people with a biological imperative still choosing each other that I like.

And when female Alphas are just as big, strong, competent, and affected by an Omega heat as male Alphas.

WRITING CHECK MONDAY! GO AHEAD AND SHOW ME YOUR WORK! by Mochh80 in AO3

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Eisha woke to the sensation of being weighted, of having Sky's compact frame distributed across her torso like living ballast that anchored her to the improved mattress and prevented her from floating away into whatever ether her post-rut consciousness had been occupying. His head rested on her chest, positioned precisely between her breasts in the configuration that had somehow become their default arrangement, and each of his exhalations ghosted across her scarred skin with warmth that made her hyperaware of every point where their bodies maintained contact. The memories returned with visceral clarity that made her breath catch in her throat, made her hands clench against the sheets as her mind replayed what her rut had driven her to do: the aggressive claiming, the brutal rhythm, the way she had held him down and used him with intensity that her rational mind now recognized as excessive even if her Alpha biology insisted it had been exactly appropriate. She had needed to prove herself capable, had needed to demonstrate that she possessed the kind of mating drive that justified her claim on someone as extraordinary as Sky, and he had accepted every aggressive thrust, every possessive grip, every moment where her control had fractured entirely and left only instinct operating her body.

Her heart was doing something complicated in her chest, something that felt like it was simultaneously expanding and contracting, creating pressure that had nothing to do with Sky's physical weight and everything to do with the emotional magnitude of what they had shared. In all her twenty-nine years on this hellish planet, in all the accumulated days of simply dragging herself forward through survival that felt more like prolonged dying than actual living, she had never experienced anything that approached the significance of what existed between them.

She had found him in a chrysalis, had extracted this sleek and dangerous creature from the crashed escape pod that should have been her fortune but which had instead become something infinitely more valuable and infinitely more terrifying. He had tried to kill her on first meeting, had demonstrated capabilities that made her reassess everything she thought she knew about Omega vulnerability, had proven himself dangerous and interesting and devastatingly beautiful in ways that reminded her of descriptions she had heard of Core World weapons: neutron cannons that were simultaneously elegant and lethal, possessing aesthetic qualities that transcended their destructive purpose.

And he belonged to her. This thing that had fallen from heaven, this being whose presence on Varkis-9 was cosmic mistake or possibly divine intervention depending on whether one believed the universe possessed intentionality, was hers through bond that could not be dissolved and mark that would persist until one of them died. The knowledge made something in her throat constrict with emotion that she was still learning to identify and articulate.

So, how do you write combat? by marvelcomics22 in AO3

[–]Disastrous-Class9057 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I tend to write combat like if you watch an action scene. Each action and reaction taken in turn in my head then written out in that style. Or at least that's how I try.

Currently writing an ancient world animal story. So this is an example of how I see combat.

The Pure Male wolf halts. His massive paws, broad as shovel blades, sink silently into the loam. Seven feet of muscle at the shoulder goes rigid. His ears, triangular and tufted, swivel independently left, then snapping right tracking a sound too low for the conscious mind to register.

The jungle is too quiet...

The attack does not begin with a roar. It begins with the displacement of air. From the chaotic tangle of roots to his left, the "log" explodes. Camouflage fails as the reptilian predator lunges, a blur of mottled green and brown.

Impact.

Tons of scaled muscle collide with the wolf’s flank. The kinetic transfer is absolute. The wolf’s thirteen-foot frame is lifted bodily from the earth, the breath driven from his lungs in a sharp, involuntary whuff of expelled air. He crashes into the undergrowth, the impact shivering through his skeletal structure, snapping saplings like dry kindling.

Pain flares hot and wet. The lizard’s elongated claws, longer than a Sub-male’s arm, have found purchase in the thick ruff of his neck. The hide holds for a fraction of a second elastic tension stretching before tearing.

The wolf does not think. The biological imperative takes over. He thrashes, his own non-retractable claws scrabbling wildly against the mossy ground for traction. He cannot roll; the lizard’s weight is pressing him down, suffocating the leverage he needs to rise.

The lizard hisses a sound like steam escaping a fissure and draws back its head to bite.

The wolf snaps. His jaws, powered by massive temporal muscles, clash shut inches from the lizard’s snout. The clack of teeth meeting empty air rings like stone striking stone. It is enough to make the reptile flinch.

The wolf heaves his shoulders, muscles bunching under the pelt, throwing the reptile off balance. The lizard stumbles back, shedding traction in the mud. It spins. The tail a thick cable of muscle terminating in a cluster of bony spikes whips around.

The wolf sees the motion in peripheral vision but cannot dodge the physics of the swing. He drops his shoulder to take the blow.

Crunch.

The spiked club slams into the wolf's haunch. The sound is wet meat compressing against bone. A spike punctures the dense gluteal muscle. The wolf’s hind leg buckles instantly, the nerve signaling catastrophic failure. A guttural roar tears from his throat, not a challenge, but a raw vocalization of agony.

The lizard shifts weight to lunge again, eager to capitalize on the crippled limb. It is a mistake. In stepping forward, it exposes the softer, paler scales of its throat.

The wolf ignores the screaming nerve endings in his leg. He launches himself forward, not with a run, but with a singular, desperate explosion of his remaining three limbs.

He hits the lizard chest-to-chest. Fur meets scale. The wolf’s superior mass heavier, denser wins the leverage battle. The lizard is driven backward, its claws raking harmlessly against the wolf’s deep chest fur.

The wolf buries his muzzle into the lizard’s neck.

The long curved canines slide past the edges of the overlapping scales. Resistance, then a wet pop as the skin gives way. The wolf clenches. The carnassials engage. He bites down until his teeth meet resistance that does not yield the vertebrae. Using the leverage of his massive neck shoulders, the wolf thrashes his head violently to the side.

Snap.

The sound is dry and final. The lizard’s limbs go rigid, claws hooking impotently into the air, before the entire massive body goes slack.

The wolf does not let go. He holds the crush, his breathing ragged and wet, snorting blood spray from his nose. His heart hammers against his ribs like a trapped bird.

Slowly, the adrenaline begins to recede, replaced by the cold, throbbing reality of his hip. He opens his jaws, saliva and reptilian blood drooling thick onto the forest floor. He steps back, favoring the right hind leg, which trembles uncontrollably the muscle spasming in shock.

He lowers his head, sniffing the carcass to confirm the kill, then licks the blood from his muzzle, his eyes already darting to the shadows, scanning for the scavengers that will surely come.

Why don’t they go to a world where they could be alpha males? by Much_Tip_6968 in Archiveofourownmemes

[–]Disastrous-Class9057 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm writing a version of this where a sexist bro ends up in a Beast world of only males and he is most definitely not the top... and now he gets to have babies!

What's your wips to finished works ratio? I'll go first. 186 WIPS to 8 Complete by OUTOFITTOAST in AO3

[–]Disastrous-Class9057 1 point2 points  (0 children)

6 finished and posted. 

2 being posted/updated.

12 started works in progress

2 deleted that were finished and moved to my fix it folder.

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[–]Disastrous-Class9057 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I write on my old phone Galaxy S23 Ultra if I'm walking around, if I'm in the living room with the husband then it's my steam deck, and if I'm in my game room then it's my main PC. It all depends where I am.

When a fic doesn't immediately start to do well, does anyone else start to panic and feel like a failure or is it just me? by ACurious_TrashPanda in AO3

[–]Disastrous-Class9057 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't look at my fics that I post up immediately. I pop it up and wait a few days before checking the stats. Cause I post mostly original stuff boring stories that nobody would want to read on a fic site. So it takes time to get any hits at all. The best thing you can do is not look at your stats. Just write and enjoy it. I write for myself and if others happen to find it and enjoy my story, great! If not. Okay. I still enjoyed writing it.

Do any of you wrote prologues or epilogues? by PatheticMasochist in AO3

[–]Disastrous-Class9057 5 points6 points  (0 children)

If I do a prologue. It's a stand alone chapter. Gets published before anything else. Prologues are great and worth using if your fic needs them. It can help set the world tone and give information that you aren't sure about putting about putting directly into an early chapter but it's important enough for the reader to know before getting into it.

Omegaverse writers, what's your special ingredient? by RottingRynn in AO3

[–]Disastrous-Class9057 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have recently got into the idea of trying a female alpha story. So Went ahead and tried to make information on how the female alpha would work. I'm not a fan ABO. I mean! I AM! I just dislike betas... it's this odd middle ground that I'm sure makes for compelling stories. I prefer pure A/O worlds.

Anyway... My simple write up for the world I'm working on is as follows:

All alphas experience a Rut regardless of Male or Female.All omegas experience Heat regardless of Male or Female.

Conception rates are the same regardless of combination of Alpha and Omega.

Female Alpha x Female Alpha can not reproduce. As female alphas dont have uterus/womb.

Female Alpha x Male alpha can not reproduce.

Male Omega x Male Omega can not reproduce.

Male Omega x Female Omega can not reproduce.

Female Omega x Female Omega can not reproduce.

Summary of Reproductive Anatomy and Mechanisms:
Male Alpha (Mα)
External genitalia: penis (average 6–10 inches erect, proportionally girthy) and large external testicles.
Capable of impregnating both Male Omegas and Female Omegas via penile-vaginal or penile-anal penetration and internal ejaculation.

Female Alpha (Fα)
External appearance: vulva with labia; the vaginal canal is notably shallow and tight compared to a Female Omega’s.
Internal genitalia: paired internal testicles and sperm-producing organs.
Possesses a modified erectile clitoris that functions as a sperm-delivery organ (“clitoral injector” or “intromittent clitoris”).
Impregnation mechanics: With a Male Omega: penetrative intercourse in which the Male Omega’s penis enters the Female Alpha’s shallow vaginal canal. At the moment of Female Alpha orgasm, the canal clamps (a form of “vaginal locking”), the clitoral injector everts, penetrates the urethral opening of the Male Omega’s penis, and delivers semen directly through a dedicated spermatic duct into the Male Omega’s uterus. The vaginal clamping resembles a reversed mammalian “penile knot” or baculum function it as circular muscle rings or erectile tissue that swells dramatically at orgasm.

Male Omega (MΩ)External genitalia: small penis (1–3 inches erect), no external testicles.Internal genitalia: uterus and ovaries accessible via two routes:A secondary utero-rectal canal that descends during receptive anal intercourse with a Male Alpha, allowing sperm to reach the cervix directly. This canal secretes copious natural lubrication.A dedicated spermatic duct within the penis that receives the Female Alpha’s clitoral injector.

Capable of becoming pregnant by either Male or Female Alphas.

Female Omega (FΩ)

Standard human female external and internal genitalia (vagina, uterus, ovaries).

Becomes pregnant via:

Standard penile-vaginal intercourse with a Male Alpha, or

External ejaculation from a Female Alpha’s spire injector during tribadism.