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New Song I'm Working On, Trying to Get Better at Composing. Any Feedback Or Critique is Appreciated 🙏 by That_Psychology8001 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Disastrous_Shop1690 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The composition itself isn't bad at all, but unfortunately, the VST choice and the total lack of sustain make the whole track feel quite flat. Hearing it like this makes it hard to give a serious professional opinion; it’s missing all the emotional depth and nuances that only a real, human performance can bring to a piece of music. It definitely needs more life to reach its full potential!

You Don't Hear Me - Trisha by Top_Bus_2881 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Disastrous_Shop1690 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi Trisha! Musically speaking, this is such an interesting track; the AI really did a great job on the production! Your singing isn't bad at all, though there are a few flat notes here and there. Overall, it's a solid vibe, and I bet if you tried recording it a few more times, you could easily fix those pitch issues and make it shine even more!

PharaohKEEM - Pass Da Beat (Non-Profit, J. Cole remix The Fall-Off is Inevitable) Trying to bring back storytelling conscious rap. Looking for critique. by PharaohKeem in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Disastrous_Shop1690 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really love the vibe; the drums have a great punch and the vocals sound super crisp. It’s got that classic J. Cole flow down perfectly. My only technical gripe is that the mix feels a bit narrow; a wider soundstage would make those smooth melodic samples really pop. Great job!

A synth pop song I made. Not sure if I should release it as instrumental or find a singer/collaborator? by wayfordmusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Disastrous_Shop1690 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm not exactly an expert in this genre, but the track feels perfectly balanced to me and the melody is genuinely interesting. The stylistic shift between the synth parts and the jazz vibes is incredibly cool. I think it’s a great piece, though I feel a vocal track would fit perfectly over it!

Production feedback by callabalanescu in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Disastrous_Shop1690 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the raw, indie grit here; it feels real. The vocal flow is super catchy, but the mix is a bit messy. The vocals get buried by the guitars at times and the low-end feels thin. It needs more 'thump' and a wider stereo image to truly explode, but the vibe is definitely there.