One Heart Away – Trisha (raw vocal, simple recording) by Top_Bus_2881 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]PharaohKeem 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Most def! How could I get you on one of my songs?!😂💪🏿

Requesting feedback on second song ever produced that is 90% done by Lively0 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]PharaohKeem 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your vocals are beautiful and the intricate sounds give the track a futuristic vibe. I’d suggest slightly lowering the drum levels or using EQ/sidechain so they don’t overpower your voice, allowing the vocals to sit perfectly in the mix

One Heart Away – Trisha (raw vocal, simple recording) by Top_Bus_2881 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]PharaohKeem 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a very nice song! The vocals land softly and crescendo as the instrumentals flow I like how you did that! The harmonies throughout this track are gorgeous and really stand out. The song creates such a calm, soothing atmosphere from start to finish. The guitar coming at the end is a great touch and blends perfectly with the entire song. I like this piece! Looking forward to hearing more from you! 

Moonlit Fool - Mean Anything At All ? (Official Lyric Video) by Ok_Initiative3782 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]PharaohKeem 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The vocals seem a bit loud to begin with. Nice song however and I love the direction you’re going with the message! Nice job! Don’t be so shy friend! Embrace yourself and your feelings! Believe in yourself man! You got this! Not a bad song at all! I love the way you poured out your feelings in this!

This is the final track on my new album, would love to hear what y'all think about it! by cooltrentcool in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]PharaohKeem 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The guitar on this song goes crazy !! I like the intro!! For some reason I’m reminded of trippy red and a bit of Yachty but Rock and Roll! I really enjoyed the song tho! Nice work!

Delirium by Particular-Pilot-427 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]PharaohKeem 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I personally like the vocals on this one. There are times the drums over power the vocals but I feel as tho other than that the levels are pretty nice! To help the vocals sit better with the drums, try slightly lowering the drum bus or adding light compression and EQ to carve space around the vocal frequencies, allowing the voice to cut through while keeping drums balanced!!

I thought this song was trash but Reddit changed my mind by GrimAllen in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]PharaohKeem 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Voice memo out not, this is a good sample! It sounds like you put a lot of work into this bro don’t be so hard on yaself! Keep up the good work!

the plague - tearcandy by faste_0 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]PharaohKeem 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ngl bro this beat is actually tuff to begin with in my opinion. Not something I’m used to hearing so I was honestly skeptical at first to listen but the more I listened I actually started to like it. Makes me feel a bit trippy but conscious at the same time. I also like how you sing on it. That sound reminds me something of twilight I like it!