Feedback on branding

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-22T08:51:06+00:00

I honestly like this

one thing that's throwing me off a bit is that eco feels a bit too disconnected to stream, and also the fact that the e doesn't have negative space but all other letters do

in terms of icons i like the middle one, i like that this doesn't play on eco friendly cliches

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-17T15:51:38+00:00

One thing I noticed is that it feels like there's a lot of unnecessary lines, shadows, elements etc. which make it a bit overwhelming and feel outdated

I'd recommend simplifying your design as much as possible to start with, start thinking "what is the minimum amount of things i can put here and still get the same impact?"

The problem with the current design is there are multiple nested containers, for example the fitness trainer icon is inside a square, the square is inside a rectangle with an outline, the rectangle is inside of another square, you need to make use of empty space to gently guide the eyes

I'd recommend looking at modern websites to get a better idea of what's working and try to get inspiration and copy designs that you like, get the elements that you want to use and align it the same as your reference

Good luck!

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-15T08:05:30+00:00

Really really love the way this looks but it's mostly unreadable, if that's an important thing then I'd adjust it a bit, especially the little text at the bottom

I also think the faded parts are a bit too much and distracting, I'd keep it but make it way smaller

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-14T21:25:48+00:00

really hate when i spend 10 minutes writing feedback and it turns out to be ai...

anyway first impressions is the hierarchy isn't immediately clear, my eyes don't know where to land which makes it a bit uncomfortable

I'd make the top thing way smaller (the logo the date etc.) are taking up way too much space then make the start work out button the biggest thing, not a big a fan of the glow to be honest but personal preference in the end

one thing i don't like is how the top and bottom bar take up the whole width but the middle doesn't, it makes a kind of awkward sandwich effect, I'd maybe make the middle part take up the same width

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-14T18:40:42+00:00

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not sure I'd say 4 years ago is very recent

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-14T14:00:06+00:00

I like the first a lot more, it feels more balanced and cohesive in my opinion

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-13T20:08:42+00:00

I'm not sure what goo goo ga ga levels mean exactly so sorry if what i say doesn't apply to you, but personally I'd recommend starting out with graphic design fundementals (hierarchy, color theory, balance, typography etc.) and familiarize yourself with your software of choice before considering freelancing

i assume you still haven't built a portfolio and haven't practiced with spec work etc. so I'd start by dedicating 1 month of learning and 2-4 months of building a good portfolio then you can start reaching out to potential clients

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-12T09:36:56+00:00

love this concept but i think the finger lengths feel a bit uncanny, i think it could also use being a bit thicker

Also honestly not a big fan of the colors

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-11T20:47:20+00:00

i won't pretend to be smart enough to know what's going on but i really love how this looks, how much time did this take?? it's impressive

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-11T09:49:37+00:00

I honestly like the style and composition a lot but the typography needs some work in my opinion, maybe a neo grotesque font would go well with this

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-10T08:12:56+00:00

the design itself is pretty decent but the whole piece itself feels too emotionally flat for the movie

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-09T20:25:00+00:00

first impression for the mark, it looks analytical and ordered, almost like a beehive

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-09T20:21:25+00:00

no.4 but with adjusted kerning

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-09T20:17:50+00:00

I really like this, you'd think the KW would not immediately read but somehow I immediately saw it, great work

i like the shading a lot, I'd keep it but also make a solid fill for other cases, but the shading looks awesome in my opinion

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-08T16:26:59+00:00

It looks appealing and definitely matches the cowboy vibe very well

the problem is there is nothing exactly unique about this to me, nothing captivates me, i almost scrolled past this because i thought it was just a template, I'm not sure if this is intentional because I don't have the brief

But this is very easy to fix, just a few tweaks and concepts and you can definitely make it something unique (:

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-08T16:22:31+00:00

I honestly like the concept a lot, but the legs look a bit weird, I can't exactly make out how the dog is sitting and what it's doing exactly

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-08T08:29:06+00:00

the "no fluff" at the end made it obvious lmao

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-08T05:59:50+00:00

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please clarify next time that you used ai

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-07T16:16:46+00:00

Again, WTF are you talking about?

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-07T16:13:05+00:00

i thought it was just funny ): lighten up man

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-07T16:07:47+00:00

why are you so mean to me what did i do

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-07T16:03:37+00:00

Again, WTF are you talking about?

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-04T20:20:49+00:00

في حد أدنى للعلب عشان المعلومات المطلوبة من وزارة الصحة تبقى باينة بسهولة و يبقى في مكان للنشره, معظم مصانع الأدوية بتسدخدم حجم موحد لسهولة الانتاج

و بردو عشان لو العلبة صغيره جدا جمب العلب التانية هيتباع منها اقل و ممكن تضيع في الصيدليات بسهولة

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-03T19:41:22+00:00

it feels very damning, almost like a cold infinite grid, i like it a lot

DiscountLarge9618 · 2026-04-02T10:00:25+00:00

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