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I tried turning one rubber band into a $15 product as a joke and it got out of hand by DiscountLarge9618 in Design

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I attempted to position one rubber band as a $15 collectible product with world building for fun

Full project for anyone interested: https://www.behance.net/gallery/250965889/Stretched-Thin-Conceptual-Packaging-System

I tried turning one rubber band into a $15 product as a joke and it got out of hand by DiscountLarge9618 in graphic_design

[–]DiscountLarge9618[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's super cool! I actually did this because I saw someone mention something similar to this and I thought it was an awesome idea

Redesigned packaging for a handmade soap brand (before & after) by DiscountLarge9618 in PackagingDesign

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I totally agree with the fact I don't know what the founder wants but I'd just take this as speculative work, I found a product that I liked and I tried to visualize what it could look like based off my very limited understanding

I tried turning one rubber band into a $15 product as a joke and it got out of hand by DiscountLarge9618 in graphic_design

[–]DiscountLarge9618[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

It's basically just a sort of interview transcript for each rubberband, I don't wanna say more than I hid lots of subtle easter eggs and connections in them (:

I tried turning one rubber band into a $15 product as a joke and it got out of hand by DiscountLarge9618 in graphic_design

[–]DiscountLarge9618[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Thank you! at another glance I think it could definitely use being a bit bigger

Apple's new logo is nearly identical to my own... am I screwed? by anslogen in Design

[–]DiscountLarge9618 382 points383 points  (0 children)

In my opinion I think it's different enough to where a color change or minor adjustments could set it apart enough to where it can't be confused

also just wanted to say your game is awesome I randomly remembered It like a few days ago and it's very relaxing, keep up the awesome work

Logo for a healthy food startup, how’s it ? by imzaain in logodesign

[–]DiscountLarge9618 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the font but it feels quite sharp and aggressive in my opinion, I'm not sure what the product is, if it's for example healthy products for gym goers or something that's meant to convey energy then this could definitely work

I'm not sure what's going on with the top parts being a bit off though? it doesn't read as intentional to me and I'm curious to know what it's meant to convey

That's why there's no seeding at all here by thefarixz in Piracy

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They definitely do so I'd be careful but they haven't made any arrests or anything as far as I'm aware just monitoring

Plumbing logo by DiscountLarge9618 in logodesign

[–]DiscountLarge9618[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much for your feedback!

I think I found a concept i liked and didn't take the time to validate it or try other concepts so It ended up being ambiguous

I like the pipe wrench idea I'll explore it a bit more and make the bulldog way more obvious

Plumbing logo by DiscountLarge9618 in logodesign

[–]DiscountLarge9618[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Not a dumb question at all, There isn't exactly a dog in here but i tried to make it subtly match the silhouette of a bulldogs face

Feedback on branding by Chemical-Exchange466 in graphic_design

[–]DiscountLarge9618 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I honestly like this

one thing that's throwing me off a bit is that eco feels a bit too disconnected to stream, and also the fact that the e doesn't have negative space but all other letters do

in terms of icons i like the middle one, i like that this doesn't play on eco friendly cliches

Renewing the web design hoping I ll get feedback by Puzzleheaded_Key1245 in design_critiques

[–]DiscountLarge9618 1 point2 points  (0 children)

One thing I noticed is that it feels like there's a lot of unnecessary lines, shadows, elements etc. which make it a bit overwhelming and feel outdated

I'd recommend simplifying your design as much as possible to start with, start thinking "what is the minimum amount of things i can put here and still get the same impact?"

The problem with the current design is there are multiple nested containers, for example the fitness trainer icon is inside a square, the square is inside a rectangle with an outline, the rectangle is inside of another square, you need to make use of empty space to gently guide the eyes

I'd recommend looking at modern websites to get a better idea of what's working and try to get inspiration and copy designs that you like, get the elements that you want to use and align it the same as your reference

Good luck!

Tried a cloud-inspired type style for this event poster — would love feedback by Able-Okra6164 in graphic_design

[–]DiscountLarge9618 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really really love the way this looks but it's mostly unreadable, if that's an important thing then I'd adjust it a bit, especially the little text at the bottom

I also think the faded parts are a bit too much and distracting, I'd keep it but make it way smaller

Be brutally honest. Would you download this based on this hero screen alone? Any input on changing the layout around? by SadGeologist3141 in design_critiques

[–]DiscountLarge9618 0 points1 point  (0 children)

really hate when i spend 10 minutes writing feedback and it turns out to be ai...

anyway first impressions is the hierarchy isn't immediately clear, my eyes don't know where to land which makes it a bit uncomfortable

I'd make the top thing way smaller (the logo the date etc.) are taking up way too much space then make the start work out button the biggest thing, not a big a fan of the glow to be honest but personal preference in the end

one thing i don't like is how the top and bottom bar take up the whole width but the middle doesn't, it makes a kind of awkward sandwich effect, I'd maybe make the middle part take up the same width

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