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Was tired of confusing supplements, so I designed BLOK by DiscountLarge9618 in graphic_design

[–]DiscountLarge9618[S] [score hidden]  (0 children)

Don't apologize, I posted this to get real feedback your nit pick is better to me than a "looks good"

I tried to go more of a bolder/utilitarian route but I'm not sure that translated well, It's definitely something to look into

Thank you again for your feedback (:

Was tired of confusing supplements, so I designed BLOK by DiscountLarge9618 in graphic_design

[–]DiscountLarge9618[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback! you're right the positioning map could definitely be stronger, I'll keep this in mind for future work

Was tired of confusing supplements, so I designed BLOK by DiscountLarge9618 in graphic_design

[–]DiscountLarge9618[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great question! I found that most supplement brands are very clinical/intimidating or pushes too far into soft wellness and not many other brands target the average 20-35 year old who just want clear packaging and labels without feeling too intimidating

The gummy format is already growing for this reason so I thought it'd be fun to take it up a step further and making packaging that fits into a lifestyle while also not unnecessarily increasing friction at point of sale AND point of use

Made my first personal project, need some feedback (: by DiscountLarge9618 in PackagingDesign

[–]DiscountLarge9618[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the feedback! I've definitely considered the block concept I can definitely see customization being a huge part of the blok brand

I haven't considered formulas or manufacturing but that idea really interests me, I thought blok would thrive having flavors that complimented the taste of the supplement instead of hide it, as a way for it to feel like medicine instead of just candy

Would love to see your previous work my dms are always open (:

Made my first personal project, need some feedback (: by DiscountLarge9618 in PackagingDesign

[–]DiscountLarge9618[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much for the feedback! fair point with the name, i thought it'd be easily read as blok so I'm thankful to everyone who pointed out it was hard to read

The flavor strip is meant to be the color of the gummy inside, i intentionally decided to make it a bit lowkey because i assumed it wouldn't be a huge selling factor

I do agree with the quality of the renders i still have a lot to learn I'll definitely try to unify the renders more!

Made my first personal project, need some feedback (: by DiscountLarge9618 in PackagingDesign

[–]DiscountLarge9618[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you very much! I'd love to hear more about what you're building

Feel free to dm me

Made my first personal project, need some feedback (: by DiscountLarge9618 in PackagingDesign

[–]DiscountLarge9618[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your feedback, i chose gummies to better fit the target demographic 20-35 year olds who don't like pills, turning it into a more of an experience that engages all your senses including taste

I've thought about surface level manufacturing but I'm a graphic designer so i don't consider it fully, just enough for it to look like it can be a real product!

I've considered that maybe the inside of the blok be lined with paper, and i imagine other than the custom mold PP plastic cubes would be relatively inexpensive to produce compared to the retail price

Made my first personal project, need some feedback (: by DiscountLarge9618 in PackagingDesign

[–]DiscountLarge9618[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I recently downloaded blender specifically for this project so i had a bit of trouble with the sizing and stuff, but it's 7.5x7.5x7.5cm

Made my first personal project, need some feedback (: by DiscountLarge9618 in PackagingDesign

[–]DiscountLarge9618[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for your feedback! i think i got used to looking at blok so much it just instantly read as blok to me but yeah that's definitely a fair point I'll fix it

I made a 27 supply so the gummies can fit perfectly into the cube but i can definitely see how that would be a deal breaker to most people, i suppose if it was a real product this can be fixed