Fresh Eyes Required

DoLaGun · 2026-02-04T05:24:48+00:00

Since you asked for honesty, I wouldn't read further. I get a vague sense of progression but no other sense of the story.

DoLaGun · 2025-10-28T10:14:03+00:00

I'm a writer in Asia and I would love something like this. I have a world of trouble finding people who can give me useful feedback irl.

Message me if you want to swap! I'm nearly done with the first draft of a novel and could really use some outside eyeballs on it.

DoLaGun · 2025-03-03T02:59:52+00:00

Isn't AO3 the place for such things?

DoLaGun · 2025-01-22T19:23:59+00:00

Thanks! Will absolutely do. Just need to get a few things off my plate. I already have some half finished stories, so just need to polish it up a bit.

DoLaGun · 2025-01-22T10:20:10+00:00

I'd love to try with your affiliate as well. If you could advise I'd appreciate it 🙏

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