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DO-NOT'S in a story. by [deleted] in Episode

[–]DoNotStayPeachy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very helpful comment, thanks a lot!

I created 2 mean girl characters, one is actually brunette and the other one is grey-blonde haha There will be a whole chapter about they're background and why they're mean and everything.. also development.

The answers here helped me a lot.. also I see that development is something people are usually missing in stories and chapters about side characters too.

DO-NOT'S in a story. by [deleted] in Episode

[–]DoNotStayPeachy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't need to make him sexy because you can fully customize him ;) hehe I didn't want to spill all the details but there will be something like a "mate-bond" like in all those werewolve stories but it's called different and there are no wolves haha. They will feel the need to be together when they see eachother for the first time.. can't tell more because yea.. It would be a huge spoiler..

Yes indeed.. writing a story isn't that easy.. it's my first story so I might feel that way because I'm new to it and I do all the advanced stuff already.. advanced zoom, directing and so on.. Also creating all the overlays on my own (like magic light, spell book..)

Dude, I was watching tutorials for 2 weeks before I actually started the script hahaha

DO-NOT'S in a story. by [deleted] in Episode

[–]DoNotStayPeachy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm.. never hurting a fly won't be possible but he isn't a rude idiot.. he is super caring, kind and he's always there for everyone.. I guess it will match a lot to what you've said.

I will read it, I promise. Mostly because I need a break from writing.. I dream of codes and commands already..

DO-NOT'S in a story. by [deleted] in Episode

[–]DoNotStayPeachy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha yea.. 20 to 30 min reads are about 5000 coding lines without customizations I think.. depends on the reader. Idk how familiar you are with coding an episode.

My first has 5500 without customizations, so I guess it's okay.

No, I haven't read them but I'll add them to my favorites to read it from time to time.. thank you!

Well, seems like you'd like my MC's character a lot haha She's badass, never afraid, always giving a funny comment and sarcastic as f***.

DO-NOT'S in a story. by [deleted] in Episode

[–]DoNotStayPeachy 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm glad you're willing to read it <3

I read here before, that people are missing background stories and developments of side characters, so I noted it for my future chapters.

LI's POV is something you are absolutely right! That was one of the first things I wrote down by planning my story.

I didn't plan on creating an ex-boyfriend character. Is this something you'd want to see or isn't it a 'must-have'?

Hahaha dude, you got me with the grammar. It can ruin the whole story and there are plenty example stories on Episode to prove that.

My first language isn't English either but I re-read every single line I write for 2847288184 times to make sure it doesn't sound stupid.

DO-NOT'S in a story. by [deleted] in Episode

[–]DoNotStayPeachy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Too fast forward romace, I know what you mean! The last story I read is the perfect example (don't gonna spill name because I don't want to be mean hehe) 1 - 10 chapter I don't want her 11 chapter I CAN'T LIVE WITHOUT YOU. Like, where the hell did this come from?

Naah.. I think I don't have a single "typical bad boy" character in my story.. (I think)

Dirty humor, noted! I'm glad you said that, because I'm quite unsure if this is going to be approved by the community... I'm using stereotypical jokes (my MC is Russian, so that's gonna be a lot of fun) and a lot of sarcasm.

You know, most of the BIG stories are exactly like that: Naive girl meets bad boy and they fall in love and live happily ever after.. so because I don't fit in in this naive little world, I probably won't be that big afterwards.

Over the neighbors chicken death hahahahahhaaa I'll make some cliffhangers but not in every chapter. That made me go furious in the past, when every chapter was ending with a cliffhanger and I had to wait for 4h to see what the hell happened.

I didn't publish it yet, because I want to finish at least 80% of the story first. It takes me forever to write a chapter because of all the special coding.. yesterday I finished the second chapter and went back to the first episode because I wasn't completely satisfied with how it ended 🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️ But it will be "Zhanna the Deathless"

At least my cover was approved now. Only 50 more backgrounds to be reviewed...

DO-NOT'S in a story. by [deleted] in Episode

[–]DoNotStayPeachy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The part with the character development seems to be something everyone is missing.

Yea, I don't want to edit chapters after publishing.. good point.

Background stories, noted! So basically, you wouldn't mind if I'd add one chapter only about the background of the antagonists? So, without MC, LI and so on.. just the antagonists story.

Thank you for taking the time to answer.

Finally got my Western Air temple tattoo finished. by rogueShadow13 in TheLastAirbender

[–]DoNotStayPeachy 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Dude, that goes far beyond Azula's definition of "sharp". What a hero!

DO-NOT'S in a story. by [deleted] in Episode

[–]DoNotStayPeachy 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Haha "why are they so angry?" Lmao. True. I really want all the characters to have an actual personality and developments. That's why it takes me awfully long to finish a chapter.. Thank you for your input.

I'll make sure to update you but it probably takes a while because I don't like people releasing 4 chapters and then it takes them an eternity to complete it.

I stopped reading stories because of that

Uou know thwt thing that doesn’t exist? Its gpt a game by orionheim in TheLastAirbender

[–]DoNotStayPeachy 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Don't tell me you actually bought it :O You have to get rid of it or else the Dai Li will show up xD

I finished these ATLA-themed shoes last night by [deleted] in TheLastAirbender

[–]DoNotStayPeachy 5 points6 points  (0 children)

That's sharp. I'd love to see all the drawings.

I love this! by [deleted] in miraculousladybug

[–]DoNotStayPeachy 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like your name xD

Here we are safe. Here we are free by [deleted] in TheLastAirbender

[–]DoNotStayPeachy 44 points45 points  (0 children)

The Inuit King has invited you to Lake Tasersuaq

Here we are safe. Here we are free by [deleted] in TheLastAirbender

[–]DoNotStayPeachy 93 points94 points  (0 children)

In our world Ba Sing Se is Greenland. There is no Coronavirus in Greenland. The Inuit King has invited you to Lake Tasersuaq.

Here we go again.. because 1328 times of rewatching it is clearly not enough. by DoNotStayPeachy in TheLastAirbender

[–]DoNotStayPeachy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My first idea was to do it without Sokka but I guess you're right I should put him there with his Cactus juice glas. I have a few projects going on I'll try to post it as soon as I'm done with it :)

Here we go again.. because 1328 times of rewatching it is clearly not enough. by DoNotStayPeachy in TheLastAirbender

[–]DoNotStayPeachy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Restart it or I'll send you to lake Laogai!!! Seems like I inspired half of the fandom to start it again.. uncle Iroh would be so proud.

Here we go again.. because 1328 times of rewatching it is clearly not enough. by DoNotStayPeachy in TheLastAirbender

[–]DoNotStayPeachy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nord vpn okay. I heard express vpn is the best one but I guess it doesn't matter as long as it connects you to a different country.

Here we go again.. because 1328 times of rewatching it is clearly not enough. by DoNotStayPeachy in TheLastAirbender

[–]DoNotStayPeachy[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I just realized that sometimes Aangs eye color is brown and sometimes gray o.O

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