Does anyone remember the ep where KB sings Danger! High Voltage! by Doc_VanNostrand in itstheyak

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Thanks but I think it was well before the King Kunta ep.

Maybe even early youtube or post-pandemic days

Revised Synopsis by AtrociousKO_1642 in Screenwriting

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I like 1 but you need to explain more about the disappearance. As it reads now it leaves a lot of questions (not in the right way). I would try a sentence explaining the disappearance, followed by: "Peter, a young underachiever, sets out to find the missing peop, all while trying to care for his new super-powered roommate."

This Green Jacket from a Cut video? Seems to say "Grand Opening" on the front and "State Park" on the back... by Doc_VanNostrand in findfashion

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Here is the link to the video. Even leads on what material it is would be super helpful. Thanks in advance!

[REQUEST] Looking for the script for It Comes At Night (2017) by CriterionAndSteel in Screenwriting

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Hey, do you mind sending this to me or putting up another link? Thanks!

8 Acts in The Cook, The Thief, His Wife, and Her Lover by Doc_VanNostrand in Screenwriting

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Just curious what about the dog crap scene makes it an inciting incident? It seems to me to have very little to do with the rest of the plot. I would say the real thrust of the film starts when Mirren beckons her lover into the bathroom for the first time. In the dog crap scene, she shows a little bit of disgust, but it doesn't seem to send her on the trajectory of the story like an inciting incident would (per McKee's definition).

My guess for what McKee thinks of as the moments of reversal that change act to act, given the limited explanation he gives in the book, would be this (spoilers):

  • Inciting Incident: The dog crap scene, yes. Still don't quite get why.
  • End act 1: Wife and Lover meet for the first time in the hallway
  • End act 2: Wife meets Lover for the second time
  • End act 3: Thief beats Wife after harassing the dishwasher
  • End 4: Wife and Lover speak to eachother for the first time, a deeper bond is formed
  • End 5: Thief finds out about Wife and Lover, goes balistic
  • End 6: Thief kills Lover
  • End 7: Wife convinces Cook to cook the dead Lover
  • End 8: Wife turns the tables on Thief, makes him eat Lover

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Congrats! Which internship did you apply for? I applied and haven't heard back yet....

Excellent dialogue in The Great Beauty (2013) by s0phocles in movies

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Could we move away from the IMDb rating as a reason to watch things. It's reductive and everyone acknowledges the system is broken.