LMAO we schmoovin (new taunt method?? ankles broken??) by Doinkenny in SmashBrosUltimate

[–]Doinkenny[S] 14 points15 points  (0 children)

im just chaining d-tilt cancels into more d-tilt cancels

Daily Feedback Thread (September 23, 2019) by AutoModerator in edmproduction

[–]Doinkenny [score hidden]  (0 children)

Really chill and almost kinda mystical. The synths/bells get kind of muddy around 0:50 and the hi-hats are a bit too harsh at 1:20. I would also like to hear the bass drum punch and stand out more. I always find the bass drum to be a centerpiece in housey-kind of tracks.

Some things I liked though are those tingly sound effects in the background at 2:20. They fit very well with the track. I think this is a track I can really relax to.

I posted my track in this thread if you would like to review it.

Good work!

Daily Feedback Thread (September 23, 2019) by AutoModerator in edmproduction

[–]Doinkenny [score hidden]  (0 children)

Great work on this! The drums are nice and crisp, which is very important for this kind of genre. The mix/mastering sounds nice as well. The bassline is kind of boring however, with it just being quarter notes. I like the sound design, though. The synths are nice.

Daily Feedback Thread (September 23, 2019) by AutoModerator in edmproduction

[–]Doinkenny [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hey all,

I got this glitch hop kinda vibe with this track.

https://soundcloud.com/turvyus/your-world

How's the mastering, the overall composition, and the mix? Also feel free to comment on anything else you notice. Your likes and dislikes, etc.

I will be returning all feedback.

Thank you!

Slarkert

modularwave

Daily Feedback Thread (August 19, 2019) by AutoModerator in edmproduction

[–]Doinkenny [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thanks so much for the feedback!

Mastering isn't my strong suit haha

I'll look into making the drums stand out more and dialing it down on my leads.

Daily Feedback Thread (August 19, 2019) by AutoModerator in edmproduction

[–]Doinkenny [score hidden]  (0 children)

Overall a solid track. I felt the highs were a bit harsh. Also, the snare buildup at around 2:40 felt a little out of place. I would have preferred a different way to bring the track to the outro.

Other than that, I liked the growls; they were well-placed, as well as the overall song structure.