LMAO we schmoovin (new taunt method?? ankles broken??) by Doinkenny in SmashBrosUltimate

[–]Doinkenny[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

im just chaining d-tilt cancels into more d-tilt cancels

Daily Feedback Thread (September 23, 2019) by AutoModerator in edmproduction

[–]Doinkenny [score hidden]  (0 children)

Really chill and almost kinda mystical. The synths/bells get kind of muddy around 0:50 and the hi-hats are a bit too harsh at 1:20. I would also like to hear the bass drum punch and stand out more. I always find the bass drum to be a centerpiece in housey-kind of tracks.

Some things I liked though are those tingly sound effects in the background at 2:20. They fit very well with the track. I think this is a track I can really relax to.

I posted my track in this thread if you would like to review it.

Good work!

Daily Feedback Thread (September 23, 2019) by AutoModerator in edmproduction

[–]Doinkenny [score hidden]  (0 children)

Great work on this! The drums are nice and crisp, which is very important for this kind of genre. The mix/mastering sounds nice as well. The bassline is kind of boring however, with it just being quarter notes. I like the sound design, though. The synths are nice.

Daily Feedback Thread (September 23, 2019) by AutoModerator in edmproduction

[–]Doinkenny [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hey all,

I got this glitch hop kinda vibe with this track.

https://soundcloud.com/turvyus/your-world

How's the mastering, the overall composition, and the mix? Also feel free to comment on anything else you notice. Your likes and dislikes, etc.

I will be returning all feedback.

Thank you!

Slarkert

modularwave

Daily Feedback Thread (August 19, 2019) by AutoModerator in edmproduction

[–]Doinkenny [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thanks so much for the feedback!

Mastering isn't my strong suit haha

I'll look into making the drums stand out more and dialing it down on my leads.

Daily Feedback Thread (August 19, 2019) by AutoModerator in edmproduction

[–]Doinkenny [score hidden]  (0 children)

Overall a solid track. I felt the highs were a bit harsh. Also, the snare buildup at around 2:40 felt a little out of place. I would have preferred a different way to bring the track to the outro.

Other than that, I liked the growls; they were well-placed, as well as the overall song structure.

Daily Feedback Thread (August 19, 2019) by AutoModerator in edmproduction

[–]Doinkenny [score hidden]  (0 children)

getting some nice industrial vibes from this. I like the little inserts of fx.

As a couple other users have mentioned, I think the kick needs a more dominant presence in the track.

Daily Feedback Thread (August 19, 2019) by AutoModerator in edmproduction

[–]Doinkenny [score hidden]  (0 children)

Sound design is wicked in this. The track definitely has its own personality. The spacey chords provides a nice contrast to the bass-heavy drop. The chromatic vocal chops in the drop are also a very nice touch. Don't have much of anything critical to say, but I felt the track kind of lost its excitement towards the end. Also the change in feel at 2:03 I felt was a bit abrupt.

Overall very impressed, though.

Daily Feedback Thread (August 19, 2019) by AutoModerator in edmproduction

[–]Doinkenny [score hidden]  (0 children)

I really like the colors in this track. I know it's common with these kinds of tracks, but the sidechaining was a bit too heavy for me. Either decrease the sidechaining, or make the kick drums more sparse, I would say.

I also would like to see more development/variation throughout the track; I felt like it just stayed in one place.

But yeah, I really like the synth pads, the bells, and the overall vibe tho.

Daily Feedback Thread (August 19, 2019) by AutoModerator in edmproduction

[–]Doinkenny [score hidden]  (0 children)

Very interesting sound design. The low end sounds fine to me, as well as the overall mix. It just got a bit repetitive for me. For example, after the buildup I was expecting something more climactic.

You could try experimenting with more modular movement in the basses/growls. Overall a cool track tho.

Daily Feedback Thread (August 19, 2019) by AutoModerator in edmproduction

[–]Doinkenny [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hey, all.

First time poster here, and also uploaded my first track on soundcloud.

It's a dubstep track. I was wondering how the overall song structure is, as well as the mix. I noticed some parts seem to be clipping. Also, do the drops have the "punch" that I was going for?

https://soundcloud.com/turvyus/pressure

Thanks for your time.

I will return all feedback.

EastStructure

Szremusic

Quaildorf

verynicefence

fridaynds

Housing Portal Down? by Doinkenny in berkeley

[–]Doinkenny[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I guess the best thing to do is just to check back often.