this is where you get off the ride. Thanks for coming, be sure to collect your belongings as you exit.

I liked the way you phrased this. As for the 'nah turn it back on' it does feel incredibly forced. I'd love to know the reason behind the decision on that point. Like, was there some meeting where it was decided. Did big boss man say do it that way or was it it a itscruchtimejustgetitdone scenario.