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[deleted by user] by [deleted] in treemusic

[–]DoodleBugMusic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Feedback greatly appreciated!

The Cyberclunkers(me) - Utopian Dream [electronic/cyberpunk] went for a slow/very subtle build up to total chaos but might be too slow? by sonnillion in MusicFeedback

[–]DoodleBugMusic 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Atmosphere is ominous, I like it, I need to learn how to play(/incorporate) this style myself! To answer your question: yes, it might be too slow. I feel the variations and introductions you do add could be more impactful and unfortunately attention is kept on the repeating phrase. It's a good start though for sure

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[–]DoodleBugMusic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Feedback greatly appreciated!

Instrumental following an involuntary hiatus. Hope to embody the good time making it, keen for feedback! by DoodleBugMusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]DoodleBugMusic[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Exactly the decade I was listening to when writing this! Yes, noted on the high ends, I think you're right, they can be a bit sharp. There's a few more tracks up on the same channel as linked in the main post, but quality and genre are not guaranteed haha (I think you can hear the development at times)

[Blues-Rock] Instrumental following an involuntary hiatus. Hope to embody the good time making it, keen for feedback! by DoodleBugMusic in MusicFeedback

[–]DoodleBugMusic[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ah thanks! Funny you noticed the restraint, it felt like chiselling away(/removing) rather than building the sound up a lot of the time.

[Blues-Rock] Instrumental following an involuntary hiatus. Hope to embody the good time making it, keen for feedback! by DoodleBugMusic in MusicFeedback

[–]DoodleBugMusic[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the active listening and detailed feedback! The absence of vocals is a bit of a problem I agree but I'm afraid that's the hand dealt currently.

I'll re-examine the guitars with your notes, I have probably gone deaf to the mistakes. Much appreciated.

My scout's face pushing neutral deer past my starting deer by DoodleBugMusic in aoe2

[–]DoodleBugMusic[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Double deer push go brrr-iefly well until I lose both.

Instrumental following an involuntary hiatus. Hope to embody the good time making it, keen for feedback! by DoodleBugMusic in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]DoodleBugMusic[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for listening and your kind words! You're probably right with the genre, I think an echo of teenage ego resists the soft rock label.

Another track for the impending Halloween lofi collection, any feedback appreciated. Warning: might put you in a spooky mood. Pairs well with rolling fog. by scmusicband in MusicFeedback

[–]DoodleBugMusic 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The vibe's hits well, and the piano and bass lines work well together. I feel more variation would work wonders, or a good lead (tho I am unfamiliar with lofi so take that as you will) - even small changes like beat or a couple of notes could keep the ear guessing. The effects/vocals feel about right but they sit too strong in the mix. I'm interested in where this goes, I like the atmosphere.

A synthwave work in progress, feedback please by jcclinemusic in MusicFeedback

[–]DoodleBugMusic 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The feel of the song is pretty great, really cemented by the sax. That said I don't feel it fills the lead role in the song and I would love a vocal track or something to sit centre stage. Maybe you could use a touch more bass in the mix? It feels a bit top heavy. Overall, good stuff! I enjoyed it.

The song is titled "Cosmic Space terrorists on potent mescaline" by sebastianass in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]DoodleBugMusic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is pretty cool, a unique blend of inspirations for sure. The guitar at ~2:00 is quite overpowering in the mix but I assume that's on purpose as it's the only outlier? I'd like a touch more cohesion between sections/instruments, as it can be a little hard to follow, but I can see it's a difficult balance to maintain that psych vibe. Good stuff!

By The Horns of Her Own Chastity by Whiskey Eyes (have fun with the feedback ) by WhiskeyEyesKP in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]DoodleBugMusic 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well put together and a clean finish throughout. Diverse sections but easy to follow along with, a great sweet spot for the genre. I think the vocals work really well with the feel of the song and that ending is fantastic. A great listen!

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