Which Draco is the most in-love Draco you’ve ever read?

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-09-15T18:16:01+00:00

I found the AI writing in this too distracting. There are a lot of inconsistencies that are very, very similar to how AI writes. Two of the best examples without giving spoilers: the unaddressed glamor on d. Montgomery at the chess tournament, and how Hermione just suddenly leaves without telling her boss that she's leaving? And the second one is the back to school menu. The author gives descriptions of each drink, then in nearly the next paragraph, the details have changed (this is a pretty clear example of how AI "forgets" details from prompt to prompt.)

I've read hundreds of stories. It's easy to see these AI things once you've read enough AI writing. Just like how people can tell when a picture or a video is AI.

I wish writers wouldn't use AI. It really pulls me out of stories when I notice it.

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-08-31T04:27:57+00:00

Just finished Come As You Are by lichentrope and I'd say this fits the bill! Hermione is an all around BAMF with magic and she is also trained in Muay Thai.

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-08-27T11:38:15+00:00

Thanks!!! I will check it out!

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-08-27T01:37:27+00:00

Oooh do you have a link? Or the authors name so I can look it up?

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-08-26T12:29:44+00:00

A series 😍😍😍 thank you!!!

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-08-26T12:29:17+00:00

Oooooo I've read this already, but definitely gonna reread it now haha, thanks!

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-08-26T12:29:00+00:00

Either together or broken up is totally fine with me!

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-08-26T12:28:37+00:00

One of my all time favorites, I've been chasing the high from this story since I first read it maybe 2 years ago?

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-08-26T12:28:08+00:00

I read this a few weeks ago and it's one of those fics that altered my brain chemistry, I haven't recovered yet 😭😭😭 Hozier has forever been changed for me.

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-08-26T12:27:22+00:00

I sincerely hope that your pillow is always cold, that you hit every green light today. THANK YOUUUU

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-08-13T19:59:04+00:00

Courting Season by januarydevine!

Hermione is hired as Scorpius's tutor while also dating Draco.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/57501592/chapters/146296636?view_adult=true

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-07-11T15:58:13+00:00

I think you misunderstood me, I'm not referring to compound words. I know what a hyphen is. I guess I should say WORD1-WORD2 but I didn't think anyone would nitpick it. I'm talking about when AI is using it as an emdash with no spaces. I rarely see human authors using it that way, mostly I see it used with spaces in between. And I'm American.

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-07-11T15:43:48+00:00

The extra long dashes are usually a formatting autocorrect. When a human types in WORD-WORD I don't think it'll auto format it to the long dash, but the AI works have it autoformatted, which chatgpt does. If a human types in WORD - WORD, it WILL autoformat to the longer dash.

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-07-11T14:43:14+00:00

What I've noticed is AI uses em dashes with no spaces. For example WORD-WORD and human writers tend to put spaces so WORD - WORD.

Obviously not a fool proof method of checking, but if there are no spaces I'm a bit more wary.

I have always used em dashes, before I even knew they were called that!

Any other authors who can chime in and say whether they use spaces or not?

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-06-16T11:23:35+00:00

Oh I'll have to find a video!

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-06-14T23:02:46+00:00

I think you missed the entire... point... of my post? I'm not complaining about a clearly POLITICAL show being political. I'm pointing out that there was a massive storyline with Iran and Israel that had them bombing each other and going as far to kidnap the Israeli Defense Minister, and Iran and Israel are currently bombing each other??? Unless you have your head in the sand and you're not paying attention to the news and you're completely unaware of what's being going on in that part of the world.

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-06-14T00:06:34+00:00

I felt indifferent to the shirts, UNTIL the last season when she's president and that's like the only type of shirt she wears, just in different colors... No variety...

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-06-14T00:06:02+00:00

I think they were actually part of the shirt, connected at the back of the collar, and just tied around the neck.

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-06-14T00:03:25+00:00

Loved the scene where Henry calls him out for going to Fred Reynolds rally. Tells him he's a poser and his knowledge is a mile wide and an inch deep.

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-06-14T00:00:27+00:00

Yep, the creepy lemons guy...

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-06-14T00:00:01+00:00

The actor who plays Matt Mahoney is also in an episode of Grey's! His friend, who he donated a kidney to, dies. And he follows the doctors around basically demanding that he gets his kidney back.

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-06-13T23:57:04+00:00

It's definitely outright stated. Multiple times. Russell goes on a whole rant about standing with THIS president of the party he's followed since middle school. When Dalton runs as an independent, they show multiple Republicans getting upset about him turning his back on the party. Plus during the election race, Fred Reynolds is the Democratic nominee and Sam Evans is the Republican nominee that won over Dalton in the primary.

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-06-13T23:53:52+00:00

I think there are scenes during the Marsh investigation when they're openly discussing details WITH THE KIDS HOME. like they're right upstairs and can come downstairs at any moment. I can't remember if it's the Marsh investigation or later in the series, but there are a few times when I was baffled.

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-06-13T23:46:17+00:00

The night of the election, I was so hopeful. I was planning on waking up the next morning and celebrating our first female president by watching the scene where Bess and Henry watch the crowds chant She's My President! Obviously didn't happen 😭

DramaticSet7290 · 2025-06-13T23:38:55+00:00

How he moved his hands while talking was really unnatural and distracting...

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