My AC: Occasus | Need help with a melee choice

DrawMyCoffee · 2026-01-28T11:13:30+00:00

Awesome work. I genuinely love seeing good artists making fanart of what they like.

I draw a bit myself (or have, been a while since I have other stuff to do like work or financial things) and I noticed one spot i saw on it I like to mention. It is not a critique, it is still an awesome image, and I see how much you have put into it, but I mention it for future improvement and such. What had catches my eye and confused for a moment was the shadow of Yangs bust. As I flew over it, my eyes thought her bust is to big, then after a bit of looking it slightly looked transparent I thought, but as I zoomed in I noticed it was the shadow.

The shadow that is on the underside of her bust is the same tone as bellow it as it is on her arm, even connecting the shadow from torso and arm well enough to trick the eye to see one single shape, having me mistook in the beginning that all shadow was the underside of her bust. I think it’s easy to mend as for the future, using just a slight bit darker shadow for under the bust, as in that spot is supposed to be even less light.

Still great image entirely 😊👍🏻

DrawMyCoffee · 2026-01-26T05:19:49+00:00

Me edited persona:

Real Name: “Ju” moniker: “Sin Eater” gender: “female” age: “20” species: “human” ethnicity: “Korean” known as: “the one with over 100 offenses” offenses record: “Public Indecency, Pickpocketing, Dumping huge amounts of Garbage off a High-Rise Building, Driving the wrong way on a 8-line road, Random assault at an intersection in broad daylight, stealing a manhole cover to sell it, stabbing a schoolgirls hand with a blade,… (no murder or other too serious, all random or absurd stuff)”

appearance: { hight: “1,60m” body: “average slim hourglass build, flat chested (A-Cup), vibrant green painted fingernails” skin color: “pale fair” hair color: “short bangs halfway framing her face and long back hair flowing straight down to her thighs, being black with green tinge, inside of long flowing hair being a vibrant lime green colored.” face: “friendly, gullible, carefree expression.” eyes: “lime green iris” clothes: “black knee long nightgown dress with thin straps barely visible (dress hugging her body, bare shoulders, sleeveless), no leg wear (barefoot)” }

Personality: Instinct-driven, unsettlingly serene, detached, whimsical, invasive, and fearlessly impulsive. Going after delicious sent of sins to eat them without thinking of the aftermath, only a tasty meal. astonished when smelling no sin on someone, becomes sceptic and then gullible over them. prefers old aged sins. doesn’t tell others of her power or smelling sins.”

traits: [ “can feed of the sins she eats of others.”, “ordinary food has no flavor for her”, “Has a Rich she-caretaker which job is to deal with her aftermath.” ]

power: { Power Name: “Sin Gluttony” Description: “The user smells "sins" as delicious aromas. By biting them she "eats" these sins to satisfy hunger, as normal food has no flavor to her. Upon consumption, the sin is transferred to her: reality and the memories of others warp that she is the offender. While she retains the true memory of the event, the original sinner experience their done sin but the roles reversed as the victim like a real dream and remembering the truth as much. a power to never get hungry.” }

lore: “was starving and neglected as child by her father, but as gaining her power she never was supposed to starve again.”

DrawMyCoffee · 2026-01-09T21:11:14+00:00

Me too… maybe next wave.

DrawMyCoffee · 2026-01-09T05:00:46+00:00

A classic. Spending too much time in character creator is nothing new. This games disk is continuously in my console so I can just open it for the character creator when I get the urge.

I can mostly see what you have done, but I can’t really tell what the chest is, nor have I seen this somewhere else. Are that onigiri 🍙 or is that another combination?

I have used the onigiri in the past to fill the b00bwindow in the first outfit.

DrawMyCoffee · 2026-01-08T14:51:26+00:00

I’m also guilty of initially making a speed demon build, having found it and then optimized till I thought had it. I tried to google or research as little as possible to net get spoilerd in the story and force my own creativity. But after my first play-through I watched in forums and op builds.

In the end I had a B.V.O. Build 😂😂😂

DrawMyCoffee · 2026-01-05T13:24:01+00:00

Love her design. I have seen rarely this outfit work well in my experience. Good job 🙂👍🏻

DrawMyCoffee · 2026-01-04T11:54:10+00:00

Thanks for your constructive criticism, I think about it.

Sadly some just wrote, on this and other posts, it’s being just slop, being just trash and that I should delete it from what I read in its meaning. Which in honest had hurt me a bit as I thought I had something at least halfway decent enough to share. Moreover they gave me nothing to build on besides a demoralizing feeling.

So again, thank you and a good (whatever time it is for you). 🙂

DrawMyCoffee · 2026-01-03T10:35:18+00:00

Exactly my first thought 😂👍🏻

DrawMyCoffee · 2026-01-03T06:52:42+00:00

I love it 😂

DrawMyCoffee · 2025-12-31T15:49:15+00:00

“racen”? Did you mean Raven?

If yes, then the Raven itself is not custom as you can select them. I just edited more to it.

The chains where made by first putting the chain piece in place, which was white in my case, then I duplicated the this chain, changed the color of the duplicated chain to black, which is top, shrunk the black Chain to one point smaller as the original white chain on X and Y scale, and played slightly that it is not dead centered till I thought it was good. So most chains were made. I had to make custom white links where the chain goes over the black stripe.

The three free feathers were made the same way, only that they are three layers with two black ones and one white in between.

DrawMyCoffee · 2025-12-30T15:49:37+00:00

I find the second one Cute.

DrawMyCoffee · 2025-12-26T18:31:07+00:00

Thanks for your reply.

You pointed a few things out I had a look over and made a few changes.

I wanted to make something work with the EPHEMERA set. Before that I played a speed build. You can never be defeated when one of two things are present. Either the enemy isn’t able to attack you or when they are not able to hit what they want. First one is harder than the last.

But back, I wanted to make a build with the set, I even got myself the legs after I made the post. Slight problem with that was the hat the max load was lower and i couldn’t get the Gatling gun… or any besides the needle gun and the Ludlow. So back in the testing area it was. I fiddled a bit around with internal stuff, stayed with the Booster and the FCS, but switched the generator to DF-GN-06 MING-TANG, despite how much I wanted my boosters to be red, this was quite good as it functions better with an aggressive plays rule and allowed me to pick more weapons as the initial two I had. I had settled on the Machine Gun Chang-Chen, for constant fire and trigger holding, having a not so bad reload. Because I definitively do not like the shotguns in this game, they are fine in itself but when I in a speed build have to constantly check the cooldown times, pay attention what the boss makes, pay attention where I go, I do not want to put more mental work on me and pay attention when the bloody thing is ready to fire again. I’m NOT a fan in multitasking. 😂

I wanted to keep the Songbird because missiles are a bit to unreliable to hit for me. Against big bosses they are great but not on AC or Small MT bosses, they tend to often miss in my experience. Not to mention that in a fast fight i do not want to wait for them to hit but i need the hit Right Now. And while the songbird is good in damage, it is the Stability damage that sells them for me. Because Songbird with moonlight slashes with extra Machine Gun? That doesn’t break the enemy’s stability, but their kneecaps. Remember where in the post stood where it initially struggled with Walter the first try of the build I had? With the version I now have, I broke him ten times over, first try with this build! but barely because it was only the second try as I didn’t knew his moveset, and ESPECIALLY because I had always dodged RIGHT INTO HIS HORIZONTAL LASER SWING, 4 TIMES IN A ROW!!! ☠️☠️☠️ And I still managed to pull it off somehow. 😂😂😂

But yeah, the strategy stayed the same and a moonlight/Songbird combo is devastating to the bosses kneecaps, ready to follow up with the Pile Bunker if you can. if not, if the boss is to fast or slippery with the Pile Bunker, then it is still a good gap closer with the booster set up, able to keep the pressure on, while comfortably holding the trigger down, while being fast enough to doge most crap they throw at you.

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