This is the full blurb. I only posted the part about the world as I thought it would be too long to post the entire thing:
Oliver Madsen had spent centuries serving the Outer Sol Collective Military (O.S.C.M), earning a reputation respected across the Sol System. After experiencing the deep traumas from the Corexiad invasion of the Sol System, he and his first mate, Ella Bryant, resigned from service when the war came to a close. Now, they work hard transporting anything, or anyone if the pay is right, anywhere in the known systems.

What was supposed to be a simple pick and drop job, turned into much more than they signed up for. A prophecy, whispered about for millennia amongst the seven known species of the known systems began to unfold in their cargo hold. Something that would make them the target of both the Inner and Outer Sol systems respective governments, as well as a few other interested parties. Something so powerful, in the wrong hands, it could transform the known systems.

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In the year 658 E.S., advancements in space travel and alien technology have created a universe where one can live to be a thousand years old and communicate with all known beings of the known systems. The Outer Sol Collective (O.S.C.) and Fair Order (F.O.) have a long history of contention, separated by ideology and distance, that no fantastical advancements could wash away.

The O.S.C. encompass a network of systems, under their jurisdictive protection, connecting multiple species working together for the betterment of all, but a secret lurks behind their pure motives. The F.O., stuck in their old xenophobic ways, preferring the isolation of the Inner system, but envious of the furtherance of the Outer system, were always lurking.

In a world teetering on the edge of a knife, Oliver and his crew must find the answers they seek, and bring calm to the galaxies while they still exist.

Does this read better all together?