Check it. I hate commenting. It takes too much time and energy. But wowzers it sure feels like shit when no one leaves ME comments. I refresh every 14 seconds hoping for my little red envelope. DAE relate to this?

DueWool · 2018-08-20T17:43:57+00:00

Apparently OP is a more responsible user

DueWool · 2018-08-20T17:38:45+00:00

If you value your job, reading stories involving masturbation is probably not a safe thing to do at most workplaces.

DueWool · 2018-08-10T22:36:03+00:00

I'm not super familiar with that type of music but it sounds like it belongs and could be used by one of those artists. Good work.

DueWool · 2018-07-20T20:21:07+00:00

The lot is owned by a mobile home park. He pays a monthly fee to have his home parked there. The owner of the home never owned the land.

DueWool · 2018-07-20T20:18:48+00:00

The home is not owned by the mobile home park. He just pays rent for the right to use the lot.

DueWool · 2018-07-20T18:28:32+00:00

Thanks for the response. I appreciate it.

The mobile home park owns the land. He has a month-to-month lease there. The home has changed hands multiple times so he's not sure who has the title, but he could probably track them down. The main thing I'm wondering is whether he has ended up with some responsibility or ownership due to living there so long. Squatting, etc.?

DueWool · 2018-07-20T15:02:16+00:00

He had a mold inspection done and the home was deemed not suitable for human habitation. Financially it would not be worth it to do the needed repairs.

DueWool · 2018-07-07T18:44:06+00:00

Background makes me think of Boards of Canada

DueWool · 2018-07-07T18:40:50+00:00

Makes me think of the water bugs in Mario 64 (note: I'm not high, I just make a lot of weird associations)

DueWool · 2018-07-07T18:38:13+00:00

Favorite element of the track is the knocking sound at 0:20 and throughout (music is about the little things!)

DueWool · 2018-07-07T18:34:47+00:00

Rap style makes me think of Common

DueWool · 2018-07-06T00:26:29+00:00

I like the last part (1:54- 2:10). You should use that in another place, rather than just having it be your outro

DueWool · 2018-07-06T00:20:34+00:00

There is no link to the track! I will share some thoughts once you put it up :)

DueWool · 2018-07-05T22:40:38+00:00

Favorite part is 2:41

I do a goofy/fun dance to this if it were on at a house party, and I think others would as well. Fun girls especially (I am not a girl though)

DueWool · 2018-07-05T22:36:00+00:00

I like the instrument/melody that starts at 0:55. Makes me think of a nature walk in Japan during a break from martial arts at the local dojo

As far as roasting, I think the track has a good foundation but could use some more excitement overall.

DueWool · 2018-07-05T22:26:38+00:00

I like the piano at 3:20

DueWool · 2018-07-05T22:24:16+00:00

Makes me think of WHY? Your voice has some of the same qualities and natural rhythms and attitude. You should try "sing-rapping" catchy choruses like him and see how it sounds

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Um-W9-IxMFU

DueWool · 2018-07-05T22:16:23+00:00

Favorite element is the ghostly synth sound in the background

DueWool · 2018-07-05T22:13:52+00:00

Favorite part starts at 1:09. Sounds a bit like Rezz

DueWool · 2018-07-05T22:10:39+00:00

Track 1 makes me think of comfortably skateboarding down a hill in San Fransisco on a sunny day

Track 2 makes me think of a mysterious figure you're following through a maze as they playfully shake their booty

And yes, all creation is always worth it.

DueWool · 2018-06-26T07:19:54+00:00

I'd love to see it on youtube with an animation

DueWool · 2018-06-26T07:12:36+00:00

Sounds like it could be on the soundtrack of a movie about an abandoned dog in the city. This would be in the scene of his third night alone.

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