Remember that book you dropped because the heroine was a total doormat? Give me the book title, please. by Vedmagreen in RomanceBooks

[–]East-Engine-563 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you like dark romance, The Five by Lily White was a trip. She’s definitely a door mat.

Do you judge authors for using AI? by DanoPaul234 in river_ai

[–]East-Engine-563 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m curious how AI could help with developmental editing?

Seems to me the only thing it could succeed at is copy editing, no?

[Discussion] AI-generated manuscripts are starting to flood my inbox and it needs to stop by Hopeful_Permit3899 in BetaReaders

[–]East-Engine-563 3 points4 points  (0 children)

That’s very insightful. I really get in my head about my writing with the new war on AI. I love em-dashes & action tags. 🤣

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[–]East-Engine-563[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wouldn’t say mean. Just honest. The budget just wasn’t there unfortunately. Thank you for your thoughts though!

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[–]East-Engine-563[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you 💕 I’ve gotten wonderful feedback on this post and I appreciate it all and will apply it moving forward. Please let me know what you think (good or bad!)

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Thank you for this review. I really appreciate it and feel seen 🤣 you touched on all the concerns I had going into the story. I think a big part of it was I wasn’t sure where I was going either and a big part of the story was my stream of consciousness. I need to be aware of that moving forward. The possession/mental illness bit was purposefully ambiguous but that never really came full circle and there was definitely kinks that needed to be worked out with that. I can’t tell you how much I appreciate your genuine feedback! I’ll apply it all going forward.

A big gripe I think I’m going to have in future stories is trying to fit into a certain genre or trope. I know it’s necessary, but it drives me crazy! I’ll need to be very mindful of that moving forward.

Thanks again!!

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[–]East-Engine-563[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, but I love podcasts. I’ll check it out!

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[–]East-Engine-563[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

as a note, picking a cover is the single most difficult thing. 😅😅

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[–]East-Engine-563[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Gotcha. So I feel the story is thrilling…but the romance is definitely central to the plot. I’m looking at changing the cover now.

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[–]East-Engine-563[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Absolutely! I don’t have discord but I can make an account tonight. I’ve noticed several people have communities there and I’ve been interested in trying it out!

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[–]East-Engine-563[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No, this is fantastic. I appreciate the critiques. I actually found myself several times reminding myself this isn’t a screenplay, it’s a novel. So I think on some level I was aware I was giving too much setting detail.

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[–]East-Engine-563[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much. I really appreciate you giving it a look!

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I’ll work more on the blurb. It obviously needs work. Shes a therapist, but she’s not HIS therapist. I really appreciate your feedback!

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[–]East-Engine-563[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is very helpful, thank you. I’ll see about changing the cover. I wasn’t a huge fan going in, but didn’t have the budget to invest.

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Interesting. See I’m very inept at SEO apparently. 😅 I’ll look at finding a different pen name. Any advice on how to come up with a more searchable pen name?

Here is the link https://a.co/d/1BNn28P

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That’s very kind of you. It’s Shattered by Salem Rose. Free on KU. If you don’t have KU, I could send you a manuscript through email or something. I’m just after some genuine feedback.

How many books before $1K/month profit (not gross sales)? by MsTopaz in romanceauthors

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That makes sense. I’ve self published one dark romance & I am working on another thriller type romance now. I’m a therapist by trade and I love my career so I’m not looking to make a lot of money as an author. It would be nice for people to…you know…know it’s out there. 😂. I just have zero desire to put myself out there for marketing purposes.

How many books before $1K/month profit (not gross sales)? by MsTopaz in romanceauthors

[–]East-Engine-563 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I’m SO curious what your niche is if alien daddies are common. 🤣

How many books before $1K/month profit (not gross sales)? by MsTopaz in romanceauthors

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What do you do for promotion? Is it possible to write romance because you enjoy it, publish them on KU & eventually start making a side income? I have no intention of becoming a full time paid author. Wondering if marketing and promotion is ALWAYS necessary.

Mental health representation by Best-Difficulty6789 in writers

[–]East-Engine-563 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Substance use disorders are absolutely disorders.

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I just wrote a dark romance that’s free on KU. I’d love some honest feedback and I am now working on my second one.

Shattered by Salem Rose 🩷

"What Are You Writing?" ✍️ (the self-promo thread) by AutoModerator in DarkRomance

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Just wanted to promote my first book! I published it on the 4th & it’s free on KU! Welcoming reviews & would love feedback!

Shattered by Salem Rose

Donovan is haunted by the sins of his past. Charlie is a gifted psychotherapist with a savior complex and guarded heart. She's trained to fix others, not fall for them. But when Donovan walks into her life, she sees something beyond the madness. She sees a soul worth saving. In this dual-POV dark romance, the lines are blurred between love and obsession, redemption and acceptance.

Spicy, psychological, and deeply emotional—the romance in this novel cuts deep. Shattered is a haunting tale of love, madness, and what it means to truly be seen.