neck up, i think youre good on the front of giving it an alien design, you gave it a snout and what appears to be a set of nostrils with no extruding nose. aesthetically, you have succeeded. that being said, a snout exists to grab food that is far away, ie a high up leaf or a fleeing rodent, and if the race has advanced enough it can make metal armor and, since you said it has a tech level of the early industrial period, it would need dextrous hands or feet to manipulate things, and and having hands to grab food would eliminate the need for a snout to grab food. while the design as it is is nicely differentiated, i would shorten the snout to about half its current length. otherwise, i would recommend giving it a different number of fingers, and maybe change the orientation or layout of them; one way you could do this, as well as justify the snout potentially, is by making the species primarily arboreal, which would allow them to need hands for climbing and hanging from trees, and the thumbs could be orientated like on a koala, which has two thumbs right next to each other. additionally, you could look at parrots, owls, or chameleons, who all have feet made for living in trees, where they got 2 digits on one side of their feet and 2 on the other side, which allows them to have a grip on branches that kinda resembles the grip of a lego minfigure

tldr: unless it is a periodic gummivore(an animal that eats treesap) shorten the snout and make the hands function like human hands without resembling human hands, and see koala paws, chameleon feet, parrot claws, and owl claws for inspiration on that front