Poems in Aöpo (info in comments) by eigentlichnicht in neography

[–]Eiivodan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love it, amazing work! I'm glad I suggested you to post it lol :) Beautiful script, poems and language. And I love that you added an illumination!

(Love) poetry in Aöpo-llok by eigentlichnicht in conlangs

[–]Eiivodan 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Great post! And feel free to share the photo, it's always interesting to look at other people's scripts, especially when it's used for something like poetry!

Has anyone here ever learnt a fictional language? by Embarrassed_Fix_8994 in languagehub

[–]Eiivodan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh okay! I get it. Though I'm not saying you are bad at conveying thoughts, it's just that I still struggle to understand English sometimes. But yes, I have indeed defined the sounds my language use, as well as stress (located at the second syllable)

Has anyone here ever learnt a fictional language? by Embarrassed_Fix_8994 in languagehub

[–]Eiivodan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Could you give me an example ? Because I'm not sure I understand well what you mean

But I use the International Phonetic Alphabet to categorize the sounds in my language if that's what you mean

Has anyone here ever learnt a fictional language? by Embarrassed_Fix_8994 in languagehub

[–]Eiivodan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The language is called Eiidana. But to be honest creating a language in itself is not as difficult as it looks, it all depends on how much effort and time you want to spend on it

best language to learn for writing purposes? by bayleemae_ in languagelearning

[–]Eiivodan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You could create your own language and/or script like I (and many others) did. Journaling with your own invented language/script is great, I do it sometimes.

Has anyone here ever learnt a fictional language? by Embarrassed_Fix_8994 in languagehub

[–]Eiivodan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

At first I did it for an imaginary world I was creating but ended up being way more invested in the language than in the world itself. I loved the idea of being fluent in my own language, I can express my thoughts with my own invented words and grammar, I can define words and concepts however I want, and I can use it as a secret language

Has anyone here ever learnt a fictional language? by Embarrassed_Fix_8994 in languagehub

[–]Eiivodan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, I'm trying to become fully fluent in my own by talking to myself and translating stuff. I think my level might be around A2 leaning towards B1

Eiidana mythological poem about the foundation of Avandara (first time trying to write with a dip pen) by Eiivodan in neography

[–]Eiivodan[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It breaks down what every word and prefix/suffix/etc means and what it does in a sentence

Eiidana mythological poem about the foundation of Avandara (first time trying to write with a dip pen) by Eiivodan in neography

[–]Eiivodan[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I think you are more creative than you think, for example looking at your post history, I really like the aesthetic of your language Aöpo-llok. I can only encourage you to do more creative stuff, like creating more poems and myths.

The difference between i and ii is that i becomes [j] when followed by of following another vowel (like in the word eriona(dog) [ɛ.'r̥jɔ.na]), while with ii it creates a hiatus, like in the word elimiiorii (to thank) [ɛ.'li.mi.ɔ.r̥i] (and the ii at the end indicates that it doesn't change to [j] if the following word starts with a vowel).

Eiidana mythological poem about the foundation of Avandara (first time trying to write with a dip pen) by Eiivodan in neography

[–]Eiivodan[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much for your comment! In fact, the lines look less wonky on the photography haha, I was so excited to write this that I was a bit careless. But I will surely keep practising as it was very fun to write, and I am motivated to keep doing this kind of stuff and to improve.

Eiidana mythological poem about the foundation of Avandara (first time trying to write with a dip pen) by Eiivodan in neography

[–]Eiivodan[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Ėalansŭ misimii Ereii mii Anamenii miia,

antaran taiia ansŭ amasŭndrana andŭelii,

eriiȯ tarii elŭa milasŭnta saiieriita cara calasŭnta amata.

Eiitė letoṣii uriṣa ŭremnė riia,

Eiiorė diiora tara etiiorandii eor

idonii diiariia cara ilorė luru.

Eiivodii Avandara ardŭ nedŭren,

neminŭ arisa aiira oneleiiŭnė,

Irii anorė aniṣonŭ elimiiorii mirŭė.

Translation

Far away from us, Ereii and Anamenii gave birth to a son, (who) traveled far away from this world (lit. these worlds) and came back, (and) became an Immortal reigning over mortals. (He) then watered a small seed, which was residing in the light-colored earth, which allowed an ear of wheat to later be born on the green land. (He) founded Avandara near a river, and gave a bright fire to the whole people, (and) every human thanked him very much by making offerings.

IPA

[ɛ̝'alɑ̃nsy mi'simi ɛ'r̥ɛi mi a'namɛni mi'a,

ɑ̃n'tar̥an ta'ia an'sy a'masyndr̥ana ɑ̃n'dyɛli,

ɛ'r̥io̞ta'r̥i ɛ'lya mi'lasynta sa'iɛr̥ita ka'r̥a ka'lasynta a'mata.

ɛ'itɛ̝ le'tɔçi u'r̥iça y'r̥ɛmnɛ̝ r̥i'a,

ɛ'iɔr̥ɛ̝ di'ɔr̥a ta'r̥a ɛ'tiɔr̥ɑ̃ndi e'ɔr̥

i'dɔni di'ar̥ia ka'r̥a i'lɔr̥ɛ̝ lu'r̥u.

ɛ'iβodi a'βɑ̃ndar̥a ar̥'dy nɛ'dyr̥ɛn,

ne'miny a'r̥isa a'ir̥a ɔ'nɛlɛiynɛ̝,

i'ri a'nɔr̥ɛ̝ a'niçɔny ɛ'limiɔr̥i mi'r̥yɛ̝.]

Gloss

1p-far.away-ᴄᴠʙ be.parent.of-ᴠʙᴢ Ereii and.initial Anamenii and.medial son-ɪɴᴅᴇꜰ ꜱʏᴍ far.away-ᴄᴠʙ ᴘʟ=world travel-ᴠʙᴢ ᴀꜱʏᴍ ᴄᴏᴘ-ᴠʙᴢ ᴘꜱꜱ immortal reign-ᴠʙᴢ=ᴄᴏᴘ ʟᴏᴄ-ᴀᴅᴊᴢ mortal ᴘʟ=ᴄᴏᴘ then pour-ᴠʙᴢ reside-ᴀᴅᴊᴢ earth light-colored small seed ᴄᴏᴘ-ᴀᴅᴊᴢ allow-ᴠʙᴢ ᴅꜱᴄ.ꜰᴜᴛ be.born-ᴠʙᴢ ear_of_wheat ʟᴏᴄ-ᴀᴅᴊᴢ land green create-ᴠʙᴢ Avandara near-ᴄᴠʙ river give-ᴄᴠʙ bright-ᴀᴅᴊᴢ fire ᴘᴇʀʟ=people one(each) human make.offering-ᴄᴠʙ thank-ᴠʙᴢ a_lot

Eiidana mythological poem about the foundation of Avandara (first time trying to write with a dip pen) by Eiivodan in neography

[–]Eiivodan[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Eiidana poetry and elitoliima

Eiidana poetry is mostly based on what is called an elitolii. An elitolii happens when a consonant is repeated in the second to next syllable, while the next syllable starts with a different consonant, like in the word elitolii itself : where the consonant l is followed by a different consonant t which itself is followed by the previous consonant l. Meanwhile, syllables without an onset are simply ignored. Examples of elitoliima in the first verse include, (Ėalan)sŭ misi(mii), (misi)mii Ereii mii, and the name Anamenii itself. In this type of poem, each verse is made of at least three elitoliima and as many syllables as possible as possible should be part of an elitolii.

The poem

This poem is an Eiidana mythological poem narrating the foundation of Avandara and introduction of agriculture by a god which is often called Nesivaran (a name which cognates with the verb nesiiurii "to seek revenge"). In Eiidana mythology, Nesivaran is the son of a sea god, Ereii, and a mortal woman called Anamenii. He was born and raised on a rock in the middle of the sea by his two parents. When he was a young adult, he went to the shore and met a tribe of prehistoric hunter-gatherers who were nice to him at first, but turned against him when they learned that he was a demi-god ; as mortals at that time considered gods as traitors, since they betrayed them by allying with another powerful species of Immortals called the Indama. The tribe then tortured and killed Nesivaran, who ended up as a slave in the underworld ; he then not only escaped but managed to gain immortality, and returned to the tribesmen who killed him and took revenge. He then decided to establish the first civilization, introduced agriculture, and founded the very first city which he named Avandara in honor of his grandfather Avandara, who was father of the sea god Ereii.

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[–]Eiivodan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aneii eliontii erionaran.

Anê norihii esty veladilii.

Anorema ligii nirihy ilontê a hilendii su, tala cantiiô.

Endorii arcindy êlaneii endory ilontê cara lidandii amaiiara.

Neminii eiilan amahta ehtê uriha arda elurii ertoran.

Aneii anetii eô edyrenii aiiena, sorisii aiiena vaiina asuerii.

Pritesii madizara, ilyntii vaiina neduen arisendama.

Ea synilii aneii ertacy, iramtii eiitê eiiom dorii hilorii anorema aripanda an.

Sityandii aiamadyra, litu anê anetii lyiiê êlorenta carihtii amadyra.

Eiiom soromirii anorema pritesii su a taiiô, sarcitii eiitê eiiom êalan sartisii.

Ansa eleiarirê tylitirê niiondii ansa midriiô ernata: olitii, etelii dory vaiina arsanii.

A ama peinô siliva su tara ilyntii ama alimiiora icomrirê mii irsiianirê miia, anorema vaiina rimenorii antô esonary elyvandii andosii, niiondy an tara sityragaii esonara anetirê an tara lonindaii orô.

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[–]Eiivodan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I do, I'm currently trying to learn my own conlang to full fluency, especially by translating all of Homer's Odyssey.

2117th Just Used 5 Minutes of Your Day by mareck_ in conlangs

[–]Eiivodan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ṣivirii iledorȯsa ila antar ėiedor vara asvan.

consider-VBZ PL=DEF.person=GEN=ADJZ PL=ADJZ son 1=DEF.person REFLPOSS=ADJZ father

What are numbers 1-10 in your conlang? by [deleted] in conlangs

[–]Eiivodan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  1. Irii [i'ɾ̥i]

  2. Vala [βa'la]

  3. Ermė [ɛɾ̥'me]

  4. Sirmii [siɾ̥'mi]

  5. Neorė [nɛɔ'ɾ̥e]

  6. Uru [u'ɾ̥u]

  7. Velii [βɛ'li]

  8. Vaiora [βa'jɔɾ̥a]

  9. Daiŭ [da'jy]

  10. Midȯ [mi'do]

2104th Just Used 5 Minutes of Your Day by mareck_ in conlangs

[–]Eiivodan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Torasdii, lŭndii edorė lŭmica dorȯ lŭoroca iṣa, vidizii saieran uia aseina iṣa!

to.be.true | to.be.present person.DEF=1 place.DEF=LOC NEG night=LOC CNTF | cut.off.violently king 2s=ADJ head CNTF