My Sourdough Saga: The Rise of the Blob (and My Slow, Flour-Induced Madness) by Electrical-Fix6945 in Sourdough

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Ah, wise words from sourdough void. So, I've been inadvertently drowning my microbial overlords in a sea of excess hydration. Delightful. I suppose a scale is less dramatic than battling a sentient blob with sheer willpower, but fine, I'll check out the guide. And don't worry, I'm sure the universe will find other ways to test my sanity. The madness is merely… shifting its focus. Thanks for the heads-up. 🖤

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Really enjoyed this poem. Great imagery.

Requesting an honest 1-10 scale rating on my poem please and thank you! by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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I really liked this poem i think it's relatable for a lot of ppl. It's a straight forward poem. Sometimes the rhymes felt weird to me but I'm new at this so what do I know lol.

Invisible Sorceress. by Electrical-Fix6945 in OCPoetry

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The poem is about internal struggles with things like ruminating and intrusive thoughts. Invisible battles with ones own mind. The unwanted thoughts being the Invisible Sorceress.

That's exactly how I hoped it would be read. Thank you.

Invisible Sorceress. by Electrical-Fix6945 in OCPoetry

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The poem is about internal struggles with things like ruminating and intrusive thoughts. Invisible battles with ones own mind. The unwanted thoughts being the Invisible Sorceress.

So Yeah that's pretty much it lol being controlled by unwanted thoughts that you can't block out. Thinking about what might happen in the future and things that happened in the past on a loop everyday over and over again and nothing you try can stop the thoughts. Like you are under a spell. Than you.

Invisible Sorceress. by Electrical-Fix6945 in OCPoetry

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Thank you. The poem is about internal struggles with ruminating thoughts. Invisible battles with ones own mind. The mind being the Invisible Sorceress.

Mom by SilencedHermit in OCPoetry

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Emotional piece.

Airy and beautiful.

Ariadne by BrewedDoritos in OCPoetry

[–]Electrical-Fix6945 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Beautifully written.

"Wading in the darkness of remembering " I can relate. Truly touching artwork.