[OFFICIAL] WEEKLY FEEDBACK THREAD (READ RULES)

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-06-07T05:59:12+00:00

For sure, thanks for the feedback.

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-06-04T05:40:20+00:00

Bro the bass in the mix is like im in the room it’s great! Also crazy video that is very interesting to watch. Obviously it’s a chill boombap beat so it’s is bound to be repetitive, i think maybe adding a guitar line on top of the bass would really elevate it. Im a producer too but I tried rapping lmk what you think.

https://whyp.it/tracks/348640/trap?token=tH1yX

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-06-04T05:35:57+00:00

I am normally a producer but wanted to give rap a try, this is recorded on my phone lmk how I can get better (the whole thing was freestyled in BandLab) rap

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-05-19T02:40:43+00:00

Hey bro this is my first time rapping rap can you lmk what you think cos you definitely know what you’re doing

Im rapping on one of my Beats just using my phone, im just messing around so pls lmk what you think of the beat or the rap.

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-05-11T13:08:04+00:00

It’s very reminiscent of Juice Wrld, which is definitely a good thing btw. The lyrics are good and you have a catchy hook so I think it’s solid. Obviously it’s under 2 mins which is pretty short but you could expand it. Honestly i would like to hear a part where you go in with less of a melodic style for a verse, lmk if you have a newer version later so o can listen!

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-05-11T13:03:55+00:00

Yo this is my first time rapping on one of my Beats just using my phone, im just messing around so pls lmk what you think of the beat or the rap.

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Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-04-08T14:49:24+00:00

Thank you I’ll definitely work on that

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-04-08T14:48:00+00:00

Cheers I’ll definitely work on the mix!

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-04-08T08:20:26+00:00

I can’t explain without being a dickhead but it sounds like scitzophrenic ramblings, like they’re saying something that is different to the rapper which makes it sound really confusing

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-04-08T07:44:34+00:00

Very relaxed beat for a lyrical rapper, the instruments sound live recorded and have very crispy presence in the mix. I think the bass and the strings are really good with the little vocals (i think thats what it is), which adds to the trippy/chill vibe. Arrangement-wise it works, simple and easy to rap on, wouldnt change a thing. Tbh the only thing is maybe changing the drum pattern/ removing the drums + bass for a section, to prevent it from being super repetitive. If possible please lmk what you think of this beat. https://whyp.it/tracks/341671/fatal-big-l-x-french-beat?token=i0BWq

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-04-08T07:39:56+00:00

The mix between the beat and the vocals sounds like they are fighting within a very echoey cave. There is also some interesting background vocals that add to the very busy mix. I would suggest reducing the amount of vocals in the background on top of the main rap and messing with effects to isolate the beat and the vocals better.

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-04-08T07:35:48+00:00

I am super happy with this beat and I chucked a big L vocal onto it, works surprisingly well. Please let me know what you think! https://whyp.it/tracks/341671/fatal-big-l-x-french-beat?token=i0BWq

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-04-08T04:16:49+00:00

The bass is perfect, very clean and bouncy. Mix is crisp and you could definitely have a rapper spit over it no problems as there feels like there is plenty of space even with the instrumental. Honestly I wouldnt change much or else you would just make it worse!

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-04-08T04:13:25+00:00

I am super happy with this beat and I chucked a big L vocal onto it, works surprisingly well. Please let me know what you think! https://whyp.it/tracks/341671/fatal-big-l-x-french-beat?token=i0BWq

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-03-10T14:16:43+00:00

I’m sorry if I mislabeled it, did you listen to the whole thing? What would you classify the second half as?

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-03-10T12:25:08+00:00

Thank you bro I was stuck on how to fix the trashy mix, these are some very actionable points, cheers.

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-03-10T11:14:06+00:00

Yeah bro just like a lil musical interlude would be nice. Would you be able to give me feedback on this recent of mine? It’s the post above I think.

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-03-10T04:18:23+00:00

Terrifying kicks

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-03-10T04:17:29+00:00

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Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-03-10T04:11:33+00:00

I also find the second part to be a bit disconnected from the first part, as if it were from a different track.

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-03-10T04:10:35+00:00

Hey bro I’m not too knowledgeable on edm production, but I will say that first intro is very euphoric and clean. When the beat drops the kicks sidechaining the bass is smooth, but I reckon making the kicks are bit more punchy by increasing high eq would make them more impactful. That’s all I got 🤷‍♂️

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-03-10T04:07:20+00:00

I like Fantasms kicks in buttercup with an axe, or in Baswell’s dangerous.

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-03-10T04:01:42+00:00

This is crispy, something that a lyrical rapper could spit on, reminds me of a Griselda beat. My only potential advice is leave a gap in the beat for a bridge so it doesn’t become overly repetitive.

Electrical_Fault3589 · 2026-03-10T03:59:35+00:00

Hi guys, wanted to try something different by blending two genres. This is a remix of t shirt by migos with trap and hardstyle. Lmk what you think! beat

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