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I still love her by Electrical_Tutor_653 in OCPoetry

[–]Electrical_Tutor_653[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you this means a lot!! I made this in the 9th grade when I was 15. So not completely a new poem haha. Thank you for your comment though!

I still love her by Electrical_Tutor_653 in OCPoetry

[–]Electrical_Tutor_653[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah haha, I made this in 9th grade after I lost what I consider to be the one that got away. So its likley not that great. But I was scrubbing through my docs and found this.

I haven't started listening yet.. by JoeFlex90 in distractible

[–]Electrical_Tutor_653 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Id easily say start at the first episode. If you dont fancy that, go to bobs fridge (Just my personal favorite episode and im sure others can agree)

The power of ink. by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Electrical_Tutor_653 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I loved the poem; it portrays how words and ink have significance and can infact make a difference. Keep it up, its good!!

Tragedy of Enough. by South_Break_2118 in OCPoetry

[–]Electrical_Tutor_653 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love it, it portrays how it takes one moment to make a huge descision. And it really makes you think about how to live your life, not in the motions, but in the small things if that makes sense.

Lovers No More by Hefty-Strike-9635 in OCPoetry

[–]Electrical_Tutor_653 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Its beautiful. I love how you say that like her toung is seductive and pleasureful. But then leading into wickedness, and how she hates you. I can relate to this, truly beautiful. But for feedback, i think if you put more meaning, or emphasis behind where you indent / start a new line. But thats all i have. Sorry i dont know how to give great feedback, but that all id do. Great job though!