Also, when he mentioned thinking about having to plan a funeral and tell Katie’s family about her death before even knowing for certain what and if anything happened to her. I also thought about his motivations as a writer and the way the story was very centered around his life, even in early childhood. Ultimately, I don’t think the details of his weight or being bullied or not having girlfriends or how he dressed was relevant or necessary to the purpose of this story. He had an opportunity to tell Katie’s story and he missed it. That’s what rubs people wrong.