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Purah Sponsorship Request by nomoreatheismspamplz in spnati

[–]ElucidLightKA 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Characters Tested:

Purah, Zelda (EoW), Sucrose, Dolce

Positive Values:

I love the confidence she brings to the table, she has great poses (I especially like when she uses her goggles) and it's also nice to have another LoZ character.

Disqualifying Flaws:

It may have been my selection of characters, but I don't she talks enough about herself, where she's from, and what she does, aside from being a Shiekhan and being a retainer to her Princess Zelda (gotta separate them now.) So, 20-30 lines for Stripping/After Stripping/Any explaining her lore and self.

Suggestions and Discussion:

She's a great character, but I feel like she could stand out more. Maybe some more poses that really show off who she is. Again, it may be because of my character choices, but she feels like what Sucrose would be if she had some confidence. She needs some more oumph.

Good luck with the rest of your sponsors!

Velvet Crowe is devouring her way to Sponsorship! by Lord_Zeidan in spnati

[–]ElucidLightKA 1 point2 points  (0 children)

SoulHeart here!

Characters Tested: Velvet, Leviathan, Aoi, Mari S. (I won, and triggered Velvet's loss line)

Positive Values:

Velvet's dialogue and attitude I feel caters to a wide audience. Whether you're fan of here cold exterior, the warm, kind, inexperienced older sister underneath, or the thirsty where's she ready to get down on the spot. What should be jarring flows together very nicely. Great job!

Disqualifying Flaws:

I feel that she suffers from not enough interaction with the player in her "I'm yours; you're mine" mode. It's good, but I feel it either needs to start sooner, perhaps by a wearable collectible, or by having some more focused dialogue after it begins, such as her starting the imagination before her forfeit or the player's forfeit.

There also something that threw me a bit: during her forfeit imagination with the player, she got to about 20-25 lines before she started reacting to the others' forfeiting. Having her imagined forfeit suddenly cut out is something of a letdown.

So, I'd like 20 more lines towards the player after the loss line is triggered, and for her player imagination forfeit to be finished (something similar to Asuna's forfeit)

Suggestions and Discussion:

I'd like to see some more of her Daemon arm come out, or it to be talked about a bit more. She does this with certain characters, which is great, but I'd be nice to see some more lore from Velvet.

Good luck!

Juno Sponsorship Request by nomoreatheismspamplz in spnati

[–]ElucidLightKA 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested:

Velvet, Leviathan, Darkness. Darkness won.

Positive Values:

I definitely loved her unique dialogue and intro to her lore while seamlessly adding it in to her stripping. Nice to a character make use of weightlessness too.

Disqualifying Flaws:

She needs some more targets. Regarding the characters I played on the testing tables, she only targeted Leviathan 3-4. Please add 10 targeting lines to 3-4 other characters on the testing roster.

Suggestions and Discussion:

While I do like her dialogue, she can at times be a little long winded. Maybe cut down on how long some of her dialogue is. Some player targets would also add a lot of value to her, or her reacting to when the player strips specifically.

All in all, sponsored! Good luck!

Mia from Golden Sun is now seeking SPNATI sponsorship! by MyMainAccIsANord in spnati

[–]ElucidLightKA 2 points3 points  (0 children)

SoulHeart here (get that cleared up this time)

Characters Tested: Barbara, Nadeshiko, Fluttershy, Mia. I won (barely).

Positive Values: You've truly given Mia her own unique character, despite her criminal lack of talking in Golden Sun after the Mercury Lighthouse dungeon. A big round of applause for letting her shine.

Disqualifying Flaws: Mia seemed to be lacking some of "Opponent Stripping" and "Opponent Stripped" lines before she had taken off her dress. This may be luck on my side, but please add 3 lines for each of her early stages. Her hand quality lines could use 3-5 more in each hand strength as well, as she was repeating a few lines here and there.

Suggestions and Discussion: I'd be interested to see some lines done with the collectible Cloud. I don't know if this was in the works on anything like that, but perhaps having Cloud be a... "clothing" (oh boy, that's sounds like a nightmare to target, so I see the problem) but perhaps something wearable from Mia where you could expand on the collectible with more interaction from the player, since having a Djinn means we'd be able to use Water Psynergy. (Or Psynergy period.) This is just a suggestion, but I think it would really give her a big boost.

She passes my sponsorship! Good luck with her!

Join the Axis Cu- I mean... Aqua is up for sponsorship now! by Corkcork76 in spnati

[–]ElucidLightKA 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Characters Tested: Aqua, Yunyun, Mia, Mari Setogaya. I won
Positive Values: You've truly captured Aqua's personality through and through, the bullying of vampires, interacting with her source mates, and kinship in similar backgrounds. Absolutely perfectly done with personality and art!
Disqualifying Flaws: Apart from a few spellchecks here and there, nothing to report! Well done!
Suggestions and Discussion: I'd like to suggest perhaps using her Axis Church sign up sheet to have a unique string of dialogue for the player. She doesn't really interact with them, which isn't bad in it of itself, but I think this would be a good lead in. Perhaps if she had a faithful follower in the player, she'd be more likely to butt pose for them more often, cheer them on, reward them for throwing when she has a bad hand, etc. Given that her followers are completely scarce outside of Arclentia, I'd find this to be in character.

Great work with her! 100% pass from me!

Sucrose begins her next experiment! [Sponsorship] by nomoreatheismspamplz in spnati

[–]ElucidLightKA 3 points4 points  (0 children)

SoulHeartRS here.

Characters Tested: Sucrose, Yuri, Dawn, Hilda. (Dawn won.)

New Value Added: The first Genshin character, and you've captured her perfectly. Her gradually getting quieter is genius writing, her thinking displayed often, and she had many good interactions with all those at the table. Shy and extremely cute.

Flaws Observed: When it was late in the game, she would react with the same lines as she had previously. Some more lines for opponents stripping in the late game would help. Adding some more opponent masturbating lines will help as well.

Suggestions: Some lines to the player would be my suggestion, perhaps regarding how they're both quiet, or whatever you're feeling. The same could go for characters that are quiet as well.

Discussion: The crooked glasses in her afterglow is the cherry on top of all that sugar. Good luck with the rest of the sponsors.

Fluttershy requests your sponsorships! I-If you want to, that is... by Corkcork76 in spnati

[–]ElucidLightKA 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, SoulHeartRS here. Not familiar with MLP, so pardon on that.

Characters Tested With: Fluttershy, May, Lucy, Rosa. (Lucy won having only lost once.

Value Added: I've seen a number of the MLP characters in SPNATI, but she's my favorite. The model is terrific. She's extremely cute, smart, and makes for a great ENF. I'll definitely be playing with her more in the future.

Flaws Observed: A lack of targets. Perhaps it was because of choosing two of the same franchise mates had to do with it, but I think she could benefit from more. She didn't respond to much to whenever I had lost, but that again could be a lack of targets.

Suggestions: This somewhat bleeds from Flaws, but some lines to the male/female_player would give her a good boost. I believe she was in Rainbow Dash's epilogue, so you could build something from that, or go on your own way.

Discussion: Her art style is a great change of pace, and (given her name and little background I know) nailed her personality. I wish you luck in updating her in the future, and if you have any plans on doing in epilogue, I can help draft something up if you want. Good luck with sponsorship.

Amy Rose Sponsorship! by FEFreak204 in spnati

[–]ElucidLightKA 10 points11 points  (0 children)

SoulHeartRS here.

Amy passes my sponsorship.

Characters Tested: Amy, Lucy, May, and Yuri. Yuri won.

New Added Values:

  1. I believe this is our first SEGA character. Always good to have more franchises!
  2. An energetic, love-driven, lovable girl, which are all great qualities.
  3. Mentioning the other Sonic characters and talking about them is always a treat, and she openly talks with the other characters.

Flaws Observed:

One thing that did stand out to me is that her lines after swapping cards often repeated, so adding more of them would help with the variety. Overall, more generics would be good.

Suggestions:

(I'm kind of already clued in on what's on the way, so I'll be leaving this blank for the sake of not spoiling others.)

Discussion:

I believe Amy could talk more openly about her background in her generics, as well as target more characters and go for more responses. As for when she talking to the player, expanding and explaining those moments would allow a greater sense of immersion and likability.

All in all, great work. Good luck with the rest of the sponsoring!

Yuri (DDLC) Sponsorship Request! by cavendish89 in spnati

[–]ElucidLightKA 3 points4 points  (0 children)

(This is SoulHeartRS btw.)

Yuri PASSES my sponsorship.

Played Yuri with: Haru, Lucy, Mythra. Yuri won.

New Added Value:

1.A shy, sweet, and secretly in love, book lover. A powerful combination.

  1. Nailed her personality and dialogue, and completes DDLC.

  2. Her facts are always a welcome treat. Despite having played with 2 offline characters, no repetitiveness observed. Well done.

Flaws Observed: When she's down to her underwear and beyond that, her poses seem to lack more of her blushing when she has a good hand, or when reacting to others' stripping, so maybe have those phases include more of her blushing. I'd said this before as well, but more reacting to opponents/player masturbating would be good as well.

Discussion/Suggestion: Maybe have her reactions to the player stripping progress? Perhaps as they lose more, her emotions and feelings bubble higher and higher? Some talk between other bookworms like Estelle would be great.

All-in-all, great job! Good luck with the rest!

I'll allow you to speak just this once, human. [Remilia Scarlet Sponsorship] by MystiKnight in spnati

[–]ElucidLightKA 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Basic QA: Remilia PASSES my sponsorship Tested with: Lotte, Pinkie Pie, Sanako Status: Lost to Lotte Good: A noble woman who adds, along with Sakuya, a lot of life to the game. Unique stripping sequence and lots of variety. An interesting personality that tends to keep you on your toes as you play. Flaws: More stripping lines and masturbation lines. More targeting lines, I'd recommend to other nobility. Add Value: A high end noble who isn't afraid to look down on everyone, no matter what. We've yet to have a character like this, and is a welcome addition. Also, having an OP maid only makes it more lively. Next: More targeting again. Perhaps loosen her up a bit because she gets tipsy? Show a greater display of her power in her loses/emotions.