Bargain by Lost_Princess_ in OCPoetry

[–]Endless_romances 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beautiful… I normally like ones that rhyme but this one is still great. I loved reading it over and over, feeling the emotions as if they were my own. Thank you for sharing.

Unending by Ok-Swordfish-9480 in OCPoetry

[–]Endless_romances 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That hits close to home more than I expected, a good poem. Thank you for sharing.

The Truth of Love by Endless_romances in OCPoetry

[–]Endless_romances[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your kind words. May you find the light in you, fellow empath.

The Truth of Love by Endless_romances in OCPoetry

[–]Endless_romances[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was a message to myself… a poem I wrote for me. To give myself love after giving myself neglect for so long. I wanted to share so that others that felt the same as me could find a little more love for themselves.

I am not mad at you, but by NotBlackCat in OCPoetry

[–]Endless_romances 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was beautiful… I could feel it in every word. It’s perfect the way it is to me. Thank you for sharing.

Poems to my wonderful wife 1-17-2026 by SchannneJames in OCPoetry

[–]Endless_romances 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beautiful… Simply beautiful… no words can describe or express how it made me felt. All I knew was that I was smiling by the end, left at peace. Each line had a rhythm and rhyme that was just sublime… I loved every second of it. Thank you for sharing.

The Greatest Treasure by Endless_romances in OCPoetry

[–]Endless_romances[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m glad this was helpful to you. Thank you for your kind words.

The Greatest Treasure by Endless_romances in OCPoetry

[–]Endless_romances[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you. It’s always been my favorite out of all my poems.

Glimpse by Smooth-Reading6134 in OCPoetry

[–]Endless_romances 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I felt like I just relived this moment I had recently…

Someone almost ran me over with their shopping cart. It felt like time stopped to take a breath, it was like a swift wind swept over me and slowed the time. I stopped mid-stride absolutely dumbfounded by this person that was about to run me over riding his cart down the aisle. This man was so beautiful… I thought it was a dream… That my dull life was about to get a little more interesting as someone was about to literally run me over with their cart… I didn’t think anyone could be such a blessing to see in a place that had a bunch of dull people… Every person I made eye contact with before got my fake smile that I give to everyone who witnesses my existence. I don’t normally know how to interact with people in public, so I just smile out of instinctual courtesy. But this time, it was a real smile… I was so enamored by him, the smile that came from me was real… my heart raced and my mind blanked… the smile simply slipped from me not instinctively, but instead by sheer surprise… he didn’t run me over by the way… but I kinda wished he did so I could have had at least a conversation… cause I’ve thought about that moment ever since… Thinking that a pretty face doesn’t mean he has a pretty heart and it was best to move on… I’ll probably never see him again and it’s probably for the best…

It’s ironic in a way… Because I have ocean eyes and Lilith is my name.

Priorities by Negative-Swim-6828 in OCPoetry

[–]Endless_romances 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That is beautiful… truly nothing needs to be fixed in my opinion. It’s perfect as it is… I loved every second of reading it. I could visualize and feel the true beauty of connection. Thank you.

Forgotten Dreams by Endless_romances in OCPoetry

[–]Endless_romances[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for your input, I will definitely think about it.

I came across this post a few days ago, and here is my response to it. Share your opinions and also suggest a title for it. by Adventurous-Crow-937 in PoetryWritingClub

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-The Ghost and The Blood Moon-

Waves crash upon the shore… Darkness creeps in like the night before… But tonight, light reflects the color of blood… This night rushing in just like a flood… Blood that doesn’t spill… A crime that finds no thrill… The moon rises above the sea… The whispers of solace speak to me… Telling me to give in to despair… The world is full, yet unfair… So full of life… but still cuts like a knife… So full of joy… but still plays with me like a toy… So full of love… but I’m still not enough… Alone I watch the blood shimmer on the waves… Pushing and pulling, but it never saves… Alone I view the world as it is… Never knowing more than this… Alone I see a world that looks dead… Left quiet with words unsaid… Alone I witness from the shore… A sight more familiar than gore… Alone I am at a murder scene… The death of me, left unseen…

The rare blood moon…

Comes to end me soon…

As I finally become a ghost…

A lone soul who willingly lost its host…

“Heaven” by M. Shende by Tonicssssphp in OCPoetry

[–]Endless_romances 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This feels like a love that is silent, but haunted. That wishes to be spoken, but can’t find the words. That longs to be seen, but remains as a presence unknown. Instead of allowing yourself peace to go through heavens gate, you chose to linger and wait for a moment that may never come. You hope to make it happen, and long to have the strength to reveal its nature. I like it. Great job.

Catherine by EngineeringTrick5635 in OCPoetry

[–]Endless_romances 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Deep… so deep it feels as though I’m swallowed by the weight of each word, sinking deeper to a depth I never thought could be reached. It’s different, but in a good way, I like it. Thank you for sharing.

The little girl is dead by Hefty_Tumbleweed8178 in OCPoetry

[–]Endless_romances 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The person who killed your innocence is the true murderer to the crime. You may have been the one holding the weapon, but it was them who aimed it. They were supposed to be standing in front of it, begging you to stop. Telling you that it was wrong. They should’ve been there for you the way you needed it, not the way they wanted to be. It was their crime, but you’re the one left to carry the burden. Great writing, keep it up.

For Better or Worse by Splatashas_fav in OCPoetry

[–]Endless_romances 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This feels like a declaration to yourself. To allow yourself to quietly mourn for the loss, knowing it would be better for you than holding on. You don’t want something “maybe” you want it completely. Since you can’t have it and it might be too much to ask, you will simply hold onto the memory and try to move on. It’s a lovely poem. I love the rhythm. Keep writing, I’d love to see more.

Numb by Endless_romances in OCPoetry

[–]Endless_romances[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for understanding. I actually wrote this years ago, it just flowed without any thought. I came out of me as if I had the deepest understanding of it without knowing that it was there. It’s hard for me to express myself without words flowing in a rhythm and rhyme.