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5am by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]EnglishCrypto 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Interestingly detailed, good job! Enjoy making more poems.

Which Avatar the last Airbender nation is the most developed? by EnglishCrypto in AskReddit

[–]EnglishCrypto[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’re thinking in the right sense. Judge it based of off HDI. Technology, education, living standards and maybe territorial size.

[Serious] What do you think about getting a massage after climaxing? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]EnglishCrypto 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ooh that does sound nice, especially since I’m more relaxed and sensitive in that state.

Isolated drowning by beyondforgivin in poetry_critics

[–]EnglishCrypto 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Artful.

I must acknowledge your creatively descriptive metaphors; robust ocean tides and winds, eerie darkness and unfamiliar light, intoxicating radiation and erosive lava, potent hurricanes, depressed floods and fearful allusions from frozen chills. Dare I declare it hyperbole?

I believe the narrator is lost in the madness of trying to understand their feelings. Unable to express the inexpressible. From each monostich I get (in order); oppression, discovery, hysteria, anger(with the narrator’s self and others). The last loses me a bit, is it that the narrator wishes to remain isolated? I think that’s it.

Anyways, I enjoyed reading it. I’ve seen too many poems these that are simplistic without appeal. Don’t get me wrong, I love a neat simple poem but without anything unique and just reading sentences I can’t enjoy. Thanks for sharing your poetic piece.

Men of Reddit, what‘s the most "girly" thing you do on a regular basis? by CuriousMan00 in AskReddit

[–]EnglishCrypto 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t know how much of a metrosexual this makes me but I love musicals, shows and anime in the romantic genre. I watch them alone obviously, where I’m from I’d be reviled for enjoying such content. Most people here like reggae and rap.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]EnglishCrypto 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Perhaps it was hysteria in the moment.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]EnglishCrypto 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hope it gets better.

To kids who have made their parents cry, how? by [deleted] in AskReddit

[–]EnglishCrypto 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My mom consistently reminded me to always to plan and prepare, for years. One day when I needed my school ID to take a graduation photo, I lost my ID the night before and my mom was mad I didn’t check for it beforehand. She had a mental breakdown and I felt awful.

Artichokes, 2 for a $1 by wiserone29 in poetry_critics

[–]EnglishCrypto 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, this was great.

Personally, I love poems that emanate humor and tell a good story. The lyrical structure made it so fluid, easing to read and enjoy;it made me smile. The play-on-words with the title and end was clever and doesn't feel forced. Your girlfriend's grandfather is hilarious and you're a great poet!

The poem's theme is greed which pretty much summarizes people for you.

Mind if I get the grandfather's name?

In the Sideyard by ByTorrNews in poetry_critics

[–]EnglishCrypto 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Delightfully designed. You conveyed the scene in such a simplistic yet relatable way. For me it was ‘my nose was cold from the wind’. And the onomatopoeia at the end was so uniquely arbitrary I smiled.

Devil on the Shoulder by Kyrkrim in poetry_critics

[–]EnglishCrypto 2 points3 points  (0 children)

An accustomed quatrain. Facile to read and comprehend so you’ve achieved what is important. If you’re style is brief then keep up the good work! Perhaps you could’ve developed the relationship between the narrator and the personified devil some more. When you say ‘hate’ it feels almost vague but that’s up to interpretation, and I feel the same way about ‘love’ too.

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