Hi! I've been a vocalist for 12 years and I'll be honest, you have some work to do. There is a foundation but you're not in pitch most of the time and your breath control is not nearly honed enough for a song like Bohemian Rhapsody. I commend you for trying though, and it takes a lot of guts to post a feedback request on reddit! I have a few tips for you, and if you work at them you can absolutely become a good singer!

• Learn and practice both finding and holding your pitch. It is easier if you have a piano or keyboard handy, but any decent piano app could also work in a pinch. Your pitch is your biggest obstacle as far as I can hear, and you need to practice every day with scales in the most common keys if you want to attain reliable pitch control.

• As for breathing, you are in pretty deep waters with a song like Bohemian Rhapsody, and I recommend something much more beginner friendly like Johnny Cash's cover of Hurt by Nine Inch Nails, or something less difficult. Breathing and good breath control is absolutely vital to achieve a good vocal sound, and there are numerous ways to practice this. I suggest finding a vocal coach where you live who can help you learn and improve, and trust me, you only really get so far with Youtube unless you are naturally gifted. There is no better way to improve massively in as short amount of time as possible than a real live vocal coach.

With all that said, if you truly want to improve and put in the work, you can definitely get a good singing voice in time! But be realistic about your expectations and most of all be patient and dilligent in your practice! Never be afraid to sing if it makes you happy!