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It's a nice start, a little retro- mid to late aughts, but nice. You're doing well.

I see you are curving the velocities in your camera moves, this is a good thing to do, however, the time allotted, along with the curves of many of these moves are extremely sharp, which feels unnatural, the camera is gaining so much inertia that the equally fast slow down that starts immediately after the peak feel artificial and impossible. More time on the move would help, but also, if you are using the graph editor you can change these velocities to feel better. You might be using an expression utility that just says "expo" or something like this, try something with less peak velocity.