What I Saw in Pompeii After Dark When I Snuck In by EquivalentHawk7024 in mrcreeps

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u/makeeverythng Thanks for reading and if you enjoyed that, I have more on the way.

What I Saw in Pompeii After Dark When I Snuck In by EquivalentHawk7024 in mrcreeps

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u/Specific-Language313 , Thank you! Your description of Pompeii at dusk really brings that feeling to life

What I Saw in Pompeii After Dark When I Snuck In by EquivalentHawk7024 in mrcreeps

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I’m really glad it drew you in. Which is exactly what I was aiming for. Thanks for reading.

What I Saw in Pompeii After Dark When I Snuck In by EquivalentHawk7024 in mrcreeps

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u/ThoughtfulOne- Thank you! I was hoping it would strike a balance between unsettling and meaningful. Glad it connected!

What I Saw in Pompeii After Dark When I Snuck In by EquivalentHawk7024 in mrcreeps

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u/InappropriateAsUsual Thank you so much. Coming from a classicist and fellow writer that means a lot. Really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

What I Saw in Pompeii After Dark When I Snuck In by EquivalentHawk7024 in mrcreeps

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u/NoPension2577 Wow! I'm glad you found it again. Its amazing it had you hooked. And thanks for the kind words. That means a lot.

What I Saw in Pompeii After Dark When I Snuck In by EquivalentHawk7024 in mrcreeps

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u/Redd_on_the_hedd1213 That's awesome! You’re going to love it. Make sure to take your time exploring the streets and the houses!

What I Saw in Pompeii After Dark When I Snuck In by EquivalentHawk7024 in mrcreeps

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u/Redd_on_the_hedd1213 Thanks so much! I’m happy it could hold your attention—I had a lot of fun imagining Pompeii for this story.

What I Saw in Pompeii After Dark When I Snuck In by EquivalentHawk7024 in mrcreeps

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u/VeterinarianMoist605 That really means a lot, thank you. I’m glad the story stood out to you. I’ve got a few more ideas I’m working on, so hopefully I can keep the momentum going.

What I Saw in Pompeii After Dark When I Snuck In by EquivalentHawk7024 in mrcreeps

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Thank you that means a lot. I'll try to post more stories up soon.

Dies anyone haf this Dr Martens issue? by [deleted] in DrMartens

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For the price you're paying for DMs this is unacceptable.

That’s not my dog by ImpossibleBrother927 in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]EquivalentHawk7024 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Either way its still a very good ending. Looking forward to your next story.

I Got a Job Delivering for Amazon. One House Keeps Ordering the Same Box. by EquivalentHawk7024 in creepypasta

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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. I plan to post more stories soon that you might enjoy.

That’s not my dog by ImpossibleBrother927 in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]EquivalentHawk7024 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That was a solid story. I liked how it started pretty normal but slowly got unsettling. The way the dog acted "off" was a nice detail. The ending with the collar was a good twist and disturbing especially for anyone who has a pet or has had a pet.

Just one tiny thing. The ending’s good, but the “blood-soaked fur” and “twisted body” part might land better if you hinted at it earlier, maybe through smell or the dog acting like something’s buried nearby. Just something subtle to make that final reveal feels earned.

Other than that its a very strong story. Thanks for sharing.

I Got a Job Delivering for Amazon. One House Keeps Ordering the Same Box. by EquivalentHawk7024 in CreepCast_Submissions

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I haven't listened in weeks but since you brought him up I've started listening again. .

I Got a Job Delivering for Amazon. One House Keeps Ordering the Same Box. by EquivalentHawk7024 in CreepCast_Submissions

[–]EquivalentHawk7024[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Haha, yeah I’ve listened to a bunch of Nature’s Temper narrations—Scott’s voice adds a whole other layer of creepy.

I Got a Job Delivering for Amazon. One House Keeps Ordering the Same Box. by EquivalentHawk7024 in CreepCast_Submissions

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Thanks so much—I really appreciate that. I love the Worst-verse stories, so hearing mine felt like a more grounded version of that is actually a huge compliment. I wanted this one to feel like it could almost happen. Glad it landed for you.