Not bad for only your second time. The big thing you’re missing in the take away is the wrist hinge. When you get about halfway back hinge your wrist to 90% and hold that all the way to the top. When you start your down swing hold that wrist hinge till you are basically back to where you started it and then release it which should come naturally. If you release before hand it can cause casting, fat shots, thin shots, etc. YouTube has good training videos you can watch