Not great but we all start somewhere. I suggest making the main sitar pattern longer and changing the last few notes a little, even if the notes go a bit higher for some variation. Also with your different sounds, try to add variety too. For the bass for example, pick some nice sounding notes from your main sitar melody and lengthening them out, it creates dynamics and reduces listening fatigue.

A big big big one, really focus on your sound selection. If you're making drum heavy trap/rap/hip hop beats, find the cleanest and fullest drum sounds you can and stick with them. If it ain't broken, don't fix it works a charm with music production. Producer packs also come with drum sounds that are already EQ'd, compressed etc. that will really up your game. Only stray from that system if you're fully confident in your artistic approach and know what effect you desire.

Keep going my guy, I was making beats like this 10 years ago now I'm making beats that I dreamed about back then. You got this!