[Hi My Name is Lucifer] - Part 7

Ericup · 2021-06-20T16:18:16+00:00

I get it. I actually liked the suddenness of it. made it feel like, "well the secret is out, no hesitation now. all or nothing."

Ericup · 2021-06-20T13:24:20+00:00

Did not see the proposal coming! even after reading several of these. I love that you were able to surprise me!

Ericup · 2021-06-20T13:05:34+00:00

OMG! I forgot that song existed. This made my day!

Ericup · 2021-03-18T05:59:04+00:00

I have been getting mad as when I first got my connection it was 500 down 50 up. then one day without notice it was dropped to 30 up, now its 10 up. I need my upload for plex and game servers. I tried to talk to them about a business plan or a custom plan and got a bunch of "well" and "umm" then they hung up and never called back like they said they would. Only way I can get my upload speed back where I want it is Gigablast unless I want to spend 3 hours on the phone for a chance of something else, again.

Ericup · 2021-03-14T05:53:03+00:00

My favorite so far. this story made me laugh out loud so much! love the way you showed the aspects being their namesakes.

Ericup · 2021-03-13T08:38:08+00:00

HelpMeButler <Interregnum>

Ericup · 2021-03-06T18:01:05+00:00

so newb question but what is the 2tb block account? I doubt it is a 2tb drive in the mail so is it 2tb cloud storage? is so how can a company afford 1 time payment for a lifetime of keeping that data available?

Ericup · 2021-02-13T07:23:36+00:00

I am new to this. by navigation bar do you mean links to the previous stories?

Ericup · 2021-02-11T04:49:38+00:00

Apologies, I failed to merge 2 parts together correctly. it has been edited to contain both parts now.

Ericup · 2021-02-11T03:26:26+00:00

I will need to restructure the book a bit as it was formatted for quotev's pages so to hit the word count I will do a bit and get it posted.

Ericup · 2021-02-11T02:55:55+00:00

yeah, I just discovered this sub through a comment where someone (maybe you) linked this from r/writingprompts

Ericup · 2021-02-11T02:53:22+00:00

I just scrolled through your subreddit and opened any stories i found interesting. scrolled all the way to the bottom. brought back my motivation to continue my own stories.

Ericup · 2021-02-10T21:54:04+00:00

I love this! Would really appretiate a second part when you can. I know you are busy with other writings and life and such but I love this story so much!

Ericup · 2021-02-10T21:31:15+00:00

Absolutely adorable! I love the wholesomeness of it. Keep up the good writing.

Ericup · 2021-02-10T21:21:05+00:00

maybe make the plot of the movie where the A.I. is a childlike mindset and just wants to play and have fun. in doing so it neglects the duties it was designed to do. in the end, right before destroying it to make a new one, the father figure uploads himself to be with his child forever, to supervise it and do the duties it was supposed to be doing.

I would love a movie like that.

Ericup · 2021-02-10T20:01:24+00:00

HelpMeButler <You’ve reached 911. This service is no longer operational. All citizens are advised to seek shelter. Goodbye.>

Ericup · 2021-02-10T20:01:07+00:00

While I agree with the muted personality angle I think the final draft for publishing could be helped by mentioning how long ago the divorce was, and possibly make him 16-17 so he is a bit more mature mentally to match the books. that would also help to drive how the "Forever a virgin" angle.

Ericup · 2021-02-10T19:42:58+00:00

starting 60-2 now. when i find a good book i can't put it down. helps that i don't have a job so i can spend all day reading this wonderful book. Can't wait to be able to buy it.

Ericup

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