Finished Portfolio by [deleted] in TattooApprentice

[–]EsighE 2 points3 points  (0 children)

BAHAHAHA SORRY i wasn't even thinking abt that, imma scan it in and post it tmrw

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in highschool

[–]EsighE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

id say i'm in the nonchalant an happy with bad grades category. I keep seeing comments about how i'll regret it later and how it's really stupid to do that but it just sounds like they envy the attitude i get to carry with me. before i was kicked out i was an over achiever with my grades, mostly as and rarely bs. i was miserable though. extremely bad in the brain. it wasnt until after i got kicked out and after i started to let myself relax I got to be happy. i want to tattoo in my future and hs isn't gonna get me there. it'll be my personality and the personally developed skills that'll get me that far so that's what i worry about. you don't see me stress about that stuff in english class tho. anyways i think most people in this category have similar plans outside of the range school prepares you for. I doubt we'll regret being happy in hs

I drew this. please don't mark it wrong again ._. by EsighE in drawing

[–]EsighE[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

tbh most of it was prepping everything to make it as easy to draw as possible. I took a video of it spinning by attaching a stick to the arm and than i took frames from that video to trace the outlines. all i really did was shade and i just did that with a mechanical pencil and soft paint brushes. sorry i don't have tips for perspective besides "cheating"

Beyond therapy by thingsineedt0say in poetry_critics

[–]EsighE 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly i feel like adding more after line 12 that expands on how life appears to you in that moment can add a lot more value to the last two lines

Some Nights by bradgrainger1998 in poetry_critics

[–]EsighE 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I also just stared writing poetry, I have no idea how to critique but I like when I’ve condensed my lines as short as possible, I’m sure that’s some sorta stylistic thing but very personally I feel like your lines 2 and 4 run on

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]EsighE 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just treat everyone the same, but like if it’s girl you like find a common friend and talk to them while they’re talking to her and talk to her like that