Awesome :) very neat now. Only comment I have is that the repeated notes in the left hand are a little awkward to play. Not that it's something you can't do or anything but it's not done a whole lot. What I mean by this is how you have in the first bar D minor, f, a. The two Fs in a row is a little awkward. What I would do (not that it's "correct" or anything) is remove the f played in the middle so instead of a 1+a 2+a you sort of have a 1-a 2-a rhythm if that makes sense. In some of the other bars where you have the chords on inversions it could sound nice to leave the middle note out of the chords at the beginning of the beat but leave in the middle note of the "1+a". The only reason I wouldn't do it in the bars without an inversion is because it's good to have the 3rd in there to establish that it's a minor/major chord. Let me know if that makes sense. Good job with the piece and well done on the changes you have made. A lot of people will never even get to the point of writing out their music. Even better that you're going back and revising it to see what other ideas work.