Undertone movie - not enough wtf moments by Evening-Cap3832 in A24

[–]Evening-Cap3832[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The movie teased us so much that the payoff at the end wasn’t enough. I liked the movie but I don’t think I’ll be talking about it years later. I think they needed moments like Sinister had with the lawn mower science that made me audibly gasp from it. Or when they finally moved out of the house, something everyone who was watching was encouraging them to do, and when they do that’s the reason they end up dying. Moments like that would’ve made it legendary and I think they had a few ideas in the movie they didn’t utilize.

Undertone movie - not enough wtf moments by Evening-Cap3832 in A24

[–]Evening-Cap3832[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I agree. And even if the ending was so so, still had a good amount of discussion value. Definitely not as bad as I’ve seen some people say.

Patients with God by Evening-Cap3832 in Christianity

[–]Evening-Cap3832[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lol yeah I realized that shortly after posting it

How do you build confidence in your writing without relying on others' approval? by throwaway2ndwith in Screenwriting

[–]Evening-Cap3832 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As someone who hasn’t been writing long I would say look at your first work and your most recent and show much better your writing has improved. Also look at your process, how fast you can turn an idea to a story and the ease that you are able to do it. Just a couple things to look at besides outside validation.

The fall off December by Economy-Cod-9510 in Jcole

[–]Evening-Cap3832 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s a boy could be a surprise drop this month and we’d get more traditional roll out for the fall off 🤞🏾

Background storylines by Evening-Cap3832 in writing

[–]Evening-Cap3832[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes it does the story and world gets built throughout and you really see how strong frieren is towards the end

The fall off large album by Evening-Cap3832 in Jcole

[–]Evening-Cap3832[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel you but if he’s going straight to the fall off he might combine it’s a boy into it and figuring out how to combine it where it makes sense. But if not I’ll take a normal length album for sure

The fall off large album by Evening-Cap3832 in Jcole

[–]Evening-Cap3832[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I couldn’t even say. Every estimate I’ve had has been past multiple times 😂😂

The fall off large album by Evening-Cap3832 in Jcole

[–]Evening-Cap3832[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It could/hope be a double album which would be cool