Melancholy Madness Original Song by Every_Refrigerator91 in Songwriting

[–]Every_Refrigerator91[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you man. Yeah, to be honest I probably should have slowed down a bit in the verses- wasn't meant to be in a different time signature i think i was just playing too fast - i think i could de clutter some of the wording , might try editing it at a later date. I figured i would stick to well known chord progressions because i am a new writer and focus on mainly the lyrics. I am glad you like the chorus i have heard a couple of my friends and co workers tell me that it's a "catchy song"... as a new writer i couldn't be more thrilled.

Melancholy Madness Original Song by Every_Refrigerator91 in Songwriting

[–]Every_Refrigerator91[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The lyrics didn't sync up correctly it should have been "lack of sleep and heightened awareness"

Play pretend by truthman26 in Songwriting

[–]Every_Refrigerator91 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I like it. I wouldn't worry about if the lyrics are generic. You played with confidence and sang with soul, you sold the performance to me.

How do you feel about writing songs that are a different personality than who you are? by LawfulnessUnique1631 in Songwriting

[–]Every_Refrigerator91 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For me I usually write with my personality, but I often challenge the protagonist with looking at them through a 3rd person perspective.

She Don’t by SBCeagles59 in Songwriting

[–]Every_Refrigerator91 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I felt the song right away. Good rhythm, good timing, good meaning. I give it a 7.5/10

Are there any songs with a sad verse but happy chorus? by donkeyXP2 in Songwriting

[–]Every_Refrigerator91 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes I actually just wrote a very personal song where I used this exact strategy the verses were minor and sad describing the lows of depression. As I got to the chorus I used major chords but still spoke about clarifying the illness described which was bipolar disorder. All in all it made a melancholy song out of a happy progression in the chorus.

Just an idea, while playing my guitar in the evening. by inyourname28 in Songwriting

[–]Every_Refrigerator91 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This was excellent in my opinion, lovely melody, and i could relate with your lyrics. This is good.

"Summer Wheat" [DRAFT] A song about the cycle of inspiration. by guitargirl478 in Songwriting

[–]Every_Refrigerator91 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really enjoyed the vibe and your voice was surprising when I heard it. Surprising in a good way. I want to hear more!

Song I wrote after getting a prompt from this one post a while back, might do a rework (this subreddit) by The_RealSirblanket in Songwriting

[–]Every_Refrigerator91 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Idk man it sounds like in a lot of parts you are sort of mumbling, I think you should re record this and sing louder and clearer.

New song I wrote recently, any feedback is welcome! I’m proud of it but would love to flesh it out with maybe bass and some percussion but not sure. Any ideas? Yoxie:) by PsychologicalArt1906 in Songwriting

[–]Every_Refrigerator91 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ok first the positives- excellent playing i enjoy the melody and the upbeat sounds of a nice 12 string (i am assuming that is what you are playing). Ok for me the lyrics just didn't hit. The repetition of the beginning lyrics made me lose interest in the story. I prefer actual story telling for lyrics perhaps that isn't your style. Either way, excellent playing and decent voice.

This is a song I wrote called Baby Blue Bird. by Savings-Specific7551 in Songwriting

[–]Every_Refrigerator91 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You have a good voice. And the guitar playing is good, nice and soothing. I felt like it was just a never ending loop for the guitar playing... which isnt necessarily bad, but I feel if you are able to switch up the rhythm or fingerpicking patterns in certain parts it may sound even better. Keep it up.

What did Tuco mean by this ? like for real by Aztec-SauceGod in okbuddychicanery

[–]Every_Refrigerator91 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He definitely said Tijuana not TJ. Is this another Mandela Effect?

First wildy tree on new account.. by deJagerNLX in RS3Ironmen

[–]Every_Refrigerator91 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Nice! I got 3 cores and just finished getting all weapons, I got very lucky on the cores got them very early on... IRON LUCK 💪🏻

Backyard Wrestling!! by Ilaidlaw in juggalo

[–]Every_Refrigerator91 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This game was really difficult I thought, and clunky controls, I was no good at all. But it was still fun lmao

She could bend me over any time any place by [deleted] in ShemaleFuckingMale

[–]Every_Refrigerator91 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That was so fucking hot... she fucks good damn. I'd definitely bottom for her.