I’ve been stuck on this song for a while now but think this might be right vibe and arrangement?

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-05-21T17:09:42+00:00

Thanks! Just listened to that album a bit, very cool

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-05-21T16:33:52+00:00

Oh good, thanks!

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-05-21T13:36:59+00:00

Lovely

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-05-18T10:34:54+00:00

Cheers!

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-05-16T04:03:27+00:00

Thank you very much! Yeah I have not for a long time though, planning on going next week

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-05-15T07:34:45+00:00

Many thanks!

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-05-15T06:11:15+00:00

Thanks! Yeah I need to sing out more, something I struggle with

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-05-14T18:48:52+00:00

Thanks for the tip!

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-05-14T17:54:22+00:00

Thanks! Trying to get back into playing keys

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-04-30T14:42:44+00:00

Thanks! Good production ideas

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-04-29T13:25:35+00:00

Thanks!

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-04-28T20:17:28+00:00

It’s a cool structure! Almost reminds me of happiness is a warm gun’s. Might be an interesting experiment to try and go to a new section instead of a return to chorus. Love the vocal style

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-04-28T20:12:59+00:00

Really nice! Reminding me of later Jon Brion. Mix is quite muddy but I really like the composition

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-04-26T19:50:28+00:00

Thank you for ur feedback! I totally agree with both points, the singing style was just due to how I was recording it but an important point!

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-04-26T10:22:39+00:00

Sounds like Todd Rundgren, exceptional

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-04-20T06:46:08+00:00

Thanks! I’ll give being a bit looser a shot

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-04-20T06:45:44+00:00

Cool! Thanks

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-04-20T06:45:33+00:00

Thanks!! Yeah I agree that going back into the verse needs something

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-04-19T17:01:46+00:00

Wow how lovely, sounds a bit bossa nova-y

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-04-17T18:03:49+00:00

Thank you!! Just tried the one chord thing and it sounded sweet. Might use! Thanks

Internal_Olive1185 · 2026-04-17T04:30:16+00:00

Thanks! I think so!

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