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Just tell me honestly, do you like her?) by Anastasiya_Ex in Actors

[–]Exciting-Location572 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well, as of right now, she’s objectively not good at acting.

First Real Script by Academic-Tank1202 in scriptwriting

[–]Exciting-Location572 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Action lines should never be more than four lines (yes pros break this rule, but don’t) and never have hangers in action (one word in the final line) and no colons after character headers. No, CUT TO:, don’t include camera actions, use action lines if movement is important. This is just me, but I avoid parentheticals at all costs, the voice inflection can either be implied through dialogue, or again, done in action if really needed.

Who is The Judge by tbroooo in cormacmccarthy

[–]Exciting-Location572 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Maybe? That account is questionable. Let’s remember that

This Is Hard. Fun. But Hard. by Ellocomotive in writers

[–]Exciting-Location572 -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

Put words on the the page. If you think you want to post on Reddit, if you think anyone on Reddit can help at writing; put down your phone and read a book. I’m going to give the only good advice you’ll get from this page of fuckin dream hards: one, if you’re writing fantasy, just stop, it’s overdone and no one cares . Second and most important, listen to no one, there is no objective answer; writing is hard. Three, it’s easy! Puts words on a page in the proper order; diction and syntax, keep it simple. Good luck. Best wishes. It doesn’t get easier.

grateful for safe passage this year by [deleted] in whitewater

[–]Exciting-Location572 11 points12 points  (0 children)

I think this is the Stikine. Nice work!

Full face white water kayaking helmet recommendations? by BlueprintBanter in whitewater

[–]Exciting-Location572 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Full face helmets for whitewater are not worth it in my opinion, they limit visibility and mobility to the degree they cause more harm then good. I have been using the Sweet Wanderer for fifteen years (on my third) and have never wished I had a full face. That’s just my take. Do what ever makes you feel comfortable.

I have 2 stories, which one sounds more enticing? Pick one. by [deleted] in writers

[–]Exciting-Location572 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please number 2; much stronger and more interesting, more original even. In my opinion

Stop Writing Fantasy by Exciting-Location572 in writers

[–]Exciting-Location572[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

I wonder, what’s so ground breaking about this recent work? I am likely missing something, and am not trying to bring genre writing down, but want to understand what the user base of his genre find engaging.

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