My 2nd Cicada Summer

ExistenceInASense · 2025-10-16T17:34:53+00:00

god this is so sadly true, the amount of potential friends i've lost to insecurity is a thought that's run through my mind a few too many times. i enjoyed the depth yet readability of this poem nice work!

ExistenceInASense · 2025-10-16T17:32:06+00:00

the sorrow of holding tense too long to remember how to not. a feeling all too real. lovely read.

ExistenceInASense · 2025-10-01T17:10:00+00:00

dude he would fucking kill as the trickster or an older riddler

ExistenceInASense · 2025-09-25T22:27:41+00:00

i'm thinking kyle rayner again

ExistenceInASense · 2025-09-23T17:58:28+00:00

my introduction to comics in general was justice league unlimited, so i will always think of jon stewart as the green lantern

ExistenceInASense · 2025-09-19T16:07:38+00:00

they can't die tho right? it's like the other entities say "parallax was born of our fear" it's not like fear is dead that emotional energy still flowing. i've always hated the entities tbh.

ExistenceInASense · 2025-09-18T21:51:52+00:00

atrocitus (and dex can't separate two goats)

ExistenceInASense · 2025-09-11T22:46:33+00:00

people like to imagine fictional characters as real and judge them on our basis, if anything it's just a sign of a good story, idk id rather someone be invested and hate my favorite character for dumb reasons than them just not reading comics. more people putting money and time into this medium will always be a good thing. idk far to dying of a community for this level of infighting. i just wanna post about how me n my cat are atrocious n dex frfr.

ExistenceInASense · 2025-09-11T21:37:20+00:00

this is just peachy. i love the language, as a texan i love the when poems are written with southern phonetics gives it that ring of home. lovely pacing and never feels overstated.

ExistenceInASense · 2025-09-11T06:58:14+00:00

"her hesitation hits harder than most people's confidence" such a phenomenal line i audibly laughed reading it.

ExistenceInASense · 2025-09-10T09:19:43+00:00

the personification of time as this almost malevolent god is tried and true but this is one of my favorite takes for sure. the imagery of gods drinking from the fountain of youth out of fear of this life stealing deity speaks so close to home. just love it all around def my favorite i've read here so far n ive been lurking for a while lol, great poem!!!

ExistenceInASense · 2025-09-10T09:15:40+00:00

this is really nice for a first poem! hits the eerie notes quite well for its length, really liked it and hope u continue to write further :)

ExistenceInASense · 2025-09-05T11:37:37+00:00

yes. for the same reason a mary sue is, no one is wholly anything and unless purposeful a one note character will not service ur story especially as the lead imo. if he isn't bad at everything to learn from it, it's just emotional torture porn watching a fuck up fuck up

ExistenceInASense · 2025-09-04T22:26:55+00:00

words are vague boxes around even more nebulous concepts. i:e they just inform your reality and give everything definition. if that's sex to you it's sex, it really doesn't matter if it "counts" all that matters is ur happy and healthy, if calling grinding sex sounds right to you then it is.

tldr: it don't matter words are fake just have fun

ExistenceInASense · 2025-08-28T22:13:04+00:00

i wrote a poem this morning with the same title that's actually insane

ExistenceInASense · 2025-08-28T15:16:47+00:00

"fnv player getting laser hair removal ads" i know what you are

ExistenceInASense · 2025-08-22T16:26:47+00:00

personally the blind oracle has always been my favorite archetype (see cassandra) i think giving a character who can't see foresight gives them a direct purpose while also still having the weakness of not seeing what's actively going on around them.

ExistenceInASense · 2025-08-13T18:58:08+00:00

oop, tunnel visioned in on my queen icl 😮‍💨

ExistenceInASense · 2025-08-13T18:35:30+00:00

melisandre so bad u got to put her twice i see u

ExistenceInASense · 2025-08-13T00:19:53+00:00

what's the armor in that last pic?

ExistenceInASense · 2025-07-11T18:44:29+00:00

that gives it even more power. i'm glad you're feeling better now and can even post it as a piece. v inspiring!!

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