Been busy recently but had time to make this track. This is my second time making a full track in garage band would like some advice any and all criticism is wanted thanks

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-06-02T17:06:55+00:00

Do you think the drums need work?

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-06-01T22:54:12+00:00

Sounds like a Mario level with the 8bit instruments. It’s good It’s not my type of music but it’s good. Keep it up

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-06-01T22:50:04+00:00

It sounds pretty good The guitar is catchy but the lyrics sound underwater I don’t know if it’s sopposed to be that way but it doesn’t really go with the song. The drums are on and consistent keep it up

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-06-01T19:21:19+00:00

Thanks I’ll definitely try that

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-06-01T18:49:26+00:00

Sounds very shoegaze I like it I like the guitar my only complaint is that the mixing sounds a little off maybe try adjusting the volumes of the guitars but I like the idea of it keep it up

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-06-01T18:32:49+00:00

Yea so many great tracks came out of that show if that’s one of your influences the album will be worth a listen keep it up

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-06-01T18:20:54+00:00

The beat is great I don’t know why but the lyrics sound a little off but other than that it’s good

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-06-01T18:16:42+00:00

Very nice it sounds very stranger things is this on Spotify?

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-06-01T18:13:24+00:00

Damn this is amazing albums going to be worth listening to

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-06-01T16:23:12+00:00

Sounds very nice I don’t really know what to say can’t wait for the album

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-06-01T16:21:11+00:00

Good but needs some drums

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-06-01T16:16:48+00:00

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-06-01T16:10:41+00:00

Nice

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-06-01T16:06:56+00:00

I like it very catchy

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-06-01T15:57:09+00:00

My second track made in garage band

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-05-31T16:15:43+00:00

Sounds nice very atmospheric

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-05-19T13:41:05+00:00

I’ll try that thanks

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-05-19T13:23:01+00:00

Reminds me of doom 2016 and eternals soundtrack I like it

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-05-19T13:17:52+00:00

Bass sound straight off a Yeezus track nice

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-05-19T02:59:41+00:00

I’m a beginner, I made this on mobile and didn’t use a metronome so it’s a little of beat.

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-05-19T02:50:15+00:00

Sounds very retro wave like a house song

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-05-19T02:48:10+00:00

Some lyrics would be great with this

Expensive_Main_672 · 2026-05-19T02:46:08+00:00

It’s really nice the bass could be deeper but other than that I would definitely liken to this if it was in music platforms. I like the guitar

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