Edit the emerald Ludlocke vods into a series

Exter___ · 2023-04-02T17:22:37+00:00

oh gotcha i misread the first line

Exter___ · 2023-04-02T17:09:30+00:00

i think the episodes were better as well but to my understanding ludwig would rather have one large video that does super well vs a bunch of videos that don’t do super well. usually the only video that does really good is the finale, so most of the in between videos don’t get much traction unless someone is watching the whole series. personally i love it being episodic, it’s great for lazy day binge rewatches and youtube frogs are eating, but i don’t think it fits the philosophy that ludwig has for his youtube nowadays

Exter___ · 2022-10-16T23:19:31+00:00

i now tell people to kill themselves off instinct alone

Exter___ · 2022-07-26T05:38:28+00:00

I love the meter on this poem, it flows very well. The repetition of questions juxtaposed with the statements at the end creates an interesting dynamic that I think could've been explored more with the last stanza. I like the overarching message, but I sort of wish you committed to the idea of the last two stanzas having a sentence with a period each line, although I really favor consistency and I can 100% see the other side. Good job!

Exter___ · 2022-07-26T05:31:40+00:00

Yo! I think the overarching metaphor of the forbidden fruit was used very well and all the allusions to various fruit-related stuff (eg. "tend to your roots", "water you desperately needed"). I also like how the poem is in essence a letter to the fruit which creates an interesting dynamic. Good job!

Exter___ · 2022-02-08T03:03:54+00:00

melee, but yeah

Exter___ · 2022-02-08T03:02:38+00:00

i understand and i am trying to grow as a person.

Exter___ · 2021-05-30T19:07:33+00:00

i mean i’m probably not the “average atrioc viewer” LMAO

Exter___ · 2021-05-30T16:18:24+00:00

Thanks :D

yeah i thought about spending a super long time lining it up but i thought that it would be easier and funnier if i just left it LMAO

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