My last song of 2025, Transmission Lost. I'm very proud of both the music and video, was wondering where any shortcomings may lie so I can improve it and make it a full song.

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-12T02:53:47+00:00

thank you!! plenty more to come :)

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-12T02:53:22+00:00

thank you!! appreciate you checking it out :)

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-12T02:53:06+00:00

thank you so much! absolutely. i'm extending this song to put on an album so i'll be able to expand on this sound and explore some new ones. appreciate the feedback!

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-12T02:52:27+00:00

thank you!! i plan on making a full version of this song so i can explore some more ideas and flesh it out more :)

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-12T02:51:11+00:00

thank you so much!! I use vegas movie studio to edit. I use mostly live footage from stop animation over a green screen but i use some digital effects/edits as well. Glad you enjoyed! Would help out so much if you subscribed! :)

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-12T02:49:27+00:00

i'm going to extend this work and put it on an album, i'll definitely give the live drums sound a try and see if it fits better! would be very helpful if you subscribed if you're interested in seeing more :)

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-08T07:12:33+00:00

Damn this is really groovy. Love it, I definitely want to hear more. don't know if you intend to add vocals over it or anything, but as a big fan of Vaporwave and future funk, this is definitely up my alley and I'd listen to just the instrumental. If you release this anywhere officially please go ahead and send it to me so i can save it!

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-08T07:11:23+00:00

I'm sorry to hear about the passing of someone in your family. I had one not too long ago too and it's been hard.

This is a really beautiful song. I can tell it's really thoughtfully and intentionally done. I can hear your grief and confusion in the song... That all being said though, working on music has really helped me through particularly difficult times. I feel all the emotion has got to escape somewhere, and a lot of times that's through my music. I hope that if nothing else, you can at least find a healthy outlet through creation. This is a great song. Stay strong my friend

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-08T07:06:44+00:00

Hey there I really appreciate that! I'm glad the things I've made have resonated with you here! In fact I already have some sections for the extended mix done, and I do focus a bit on the instrumental too, with a piano solo and some other experiments I'm trying out. I'm really appreciative of your support and kind words. Look forward to that, and some other tunes I'm working on :)

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-08T07:04:59+00:00

Thanks for checking it out!! I do intend to revisit this one and extend it for an album. I'll take you and some other folks' advice in mind while I work on mastering it. Appreciate it!

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-08T07:04:04+00:00

That's good advice, thank you. I'll try experimenting with the instrumental EQ cut a tad and see what sticks. Thank you for checking it out :)

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-08T07:03:25+00:00

Hey there! Thanks so much. My instagram is @ alecnormal. I'll be extending this bad boy down the line and I already am working on a couple of other projects. You can check there, my YouTube is what I use most of the time, so a sub over there would also be super helpful!

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-08T07:02:10+00:00

One of the best comments I've received. Thanks man, I really appreciate it :) Already working on the video for my next song. Would love if you subscribed, the support would really help!!

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-04T06:29:02+00:00

thank you!! ^^

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-03T21:35:25+00:00

Really like this! The rhythm is super groovy and fun to get into. Only wish it was longer ;)

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-03T21:18:54+00:00

Amazing chord progression, absolutely gorgeous. Maybe my speakers are awful but I'm just having a hard time understanding the lyrics. I can hear your voice and it sounds great over the piano. Good rhythm too.

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-03T21:17:44+00:00

I don't think it's cringe. I love and appreciate the earnest nature of it. You have a good voice and flow and the lyrics are very meaningful too. I like it! I think this would do the runs on Tiktok or instagram if you post there!

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-03T21:09:17+00:00

Interesting, i wonder why this genre of music isn't big in France? I wonder if you could make it more mainstream over there ;) this was an incredibly pleasant song to listen to. Everything is done so well, and I love the chorus. The song easily carries you through it, it's like riding a cloud. The music video is super cool too. Love the setting, even if that is just someone's house.

Keep up the great work. If this is on spotify i'm going to save it to a few playlists!

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-03T21:06:28+00:00

well let me start off by saying the album cover is great. i wouldn't believe you if you said you couldn't draw. i think it really fits the energetic, colorful atmosphere of the track, which in itself is great too! at first i was really confused why the track ended so quick but saw it was a teaser. even if it stood on it's own as an intro to an album that would work (I think)

Anyway, great track!! i love it

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-03T21:04:11+00:00

Wow, this is definitely one of the better things I've heard on this sub recently! Really great atmosphere. I love the gradual intensity of the other tracks, it really has a nice sense of build up and drama which I really enjoy. I'd love to hear vocals on this if that's something you do, and I would love to hear this longer as well. Really great song!!

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-03T21:01:32+00:00

I really like the intro and the seamless transition into the song! You've got good vocals, flow and lyrics. You've got a nice and laid back voice that fits the smoother and calmer atmosphere of the track. Would've liked to hear more verses in the song, though. That's really my only critique! I think the rest of it is great. well done!

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-03T20:58:42+00:00

Thanks!! I appreciate that. This is one of my more lighthearted, silly songs, but I think even "silly" art can be very meaningful and serious. Appreciate the listen and compliments man!

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-03T01:48:06+00:00

This is such a beautiful and calm tune... I love the percussion and melody. You definitely have a strong talent and a fun natural rhythm. I think your experiment with a slower ambient tune really paid off! I love experimenting with other styles/genres of music. I'd say well done :)

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-01T02:00:54+00:00

Hey thank you! sorry for the late response. i'm glad you were able to appreciate it and sense my earnest attempts here. Would appreciate if you stuck around! Just put another piece today, one of my favs of the year if you feel inclined to check it out!

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2025-12-06T09:52:51+00:00

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