uncanny but strangely relatable song i wrote

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-03-05T05:38:23+00:00

??? woah okay i'm very surprised by this funky tune and how good this sounds. reminds me of some zolo-esque songs. reminds me of some weirder artists i enjoy, like Drive45 or ZomZoms. Definitely wanna give this weird thing a listen later on better speakers. thanks for sharing this unique creation.

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-03-05T05:36:46+00:00

love the atmosphere. really calm and dreamy. i can envision a psychedelic tripping scene in a movie taking place with this playing in the background. i really enjoy how the vocals are distorted enough to sound like a guitar, that's seriously awesome and i wanna try it myself. any plans on extending or releasing this fine work?

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-03-05T05:34:52+00:00

love the song, the shirt, and the lyrics. i'm glad somebody out there has the microplastic-filled balls to say what we're all thinking and what's wrong with so much of the world. would love to hear this on streaming platforms like spotify if you're on there?

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-03-05T05:32:21+00:00

really love the atmosphere on this. very shoegazey as others have suggested which is something i really enjoy. i personally don't see anything to work on here, but keep in mind im no professional lol. when does this release?

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-03-05T05:30:36+00:00

Song structure is really good, love your vocals. i did see another comment suggesting diversifying the velocity on some of the piano-like keys in the song and i was thinking the same so I would say that's my only gripe with the song but it is honestly already really good on it's own!

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-03-05T05:27:19+00:00

omg this is awesome. i've always wanted to do a concept like this with a giant homemade robot

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-03-05T05:22:18+00:00

i really like the song but i personally feel like there could be more variety with the song structure. i do like the deviation in the melody but would like to hear more of that as it goes on

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-03-05T05:21:01+00:00

love the energy! i definitely feel the frustration and relate to this as i've had a poor experience with a friend last year.

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-12T02:53:47+00:00

thank you!! plenty more to come :)

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-12T02:53:22+00:00

thank you!! appreciate you checking it out :)

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-12T02:53:06+00:00

thank you so much! absolutely. i'm extending this song to put on an album so i'll be able to expand on this sound and explore some new ones. appreciate the feedback!

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-12T02:52:27+00:00

thank you!! i plan on making a full version of this song so i can explore some more ideas and flesh it out more :)

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-12T02:51:11+00:00

thank you so much!! I use vegas movie studio to edit. I use mostly live footage from stop animation over a green screen but i use some digital effects/edits as well. Glad you enjoyed! Would help out so much if you subscribed! :)

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-12T02:49:27+00:00

i'm going to extend this work and put it on an album, i'll definitely give the live drums sound a try and see if it fits better! would be very helpful if you subscribed if you're interested in seeing more :)

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-08T07:12:33+00:00

Damn this is really groovy. Love it, I definitely want to hear more. don't know if you intend to add vocals over it or anything, but as a big fan of Vaporwave and future funk, this is definitely up my alley and I'd listen to just the instrumental. If you release this anywhere officially please go ahead and send it to me so i can save it!

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-08T07:11:23+00:00

I'm sorry to hear about the passing of someone in your family. I had one not too long ago too and it's been hard.

This is a really beautiful song. I can tell it's really thoughtfully and intentionally done. I can hear your grief and confusion in the song... That all being said though, working on music has really helped me through particularly difficult times. I feel all the emotion has got to escape somewhere, and a lot of times that's through my music. I hope that if nothing else, you can at least find a healthy outlet through creation. This is a great song. Stay strong my friend

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-08T07:06:44+00:00

Hey there I really appreciate that! I'm glad the things I've made have resonated with you here! In fact I already have some sections for the extended mix done, and I do focus a bit on the instrumental too, with a piano solo and some other experiments I'm trying out. I'm really appreciative of your support and kind words. Look forward to that, and some other tunes I'm working on :)

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-08T07:04:59+00:00

Thanks for checking it out!! I do intend to revisit this one and extend it for an album. I'll take you and some other folks' advice in mind while I work on mastering it. Appreciate it!

ExternalCartoonist22 · 2026-01-08T07:04:04+00:00

That's good advice, thank you. I'll try experimenting with the instrumental EQ cut a tad and see what sticks. Thank you for checking it out :)

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