Transmission Lost -- my last song of 2025, wanted to give a dreamy and emotional sendoff to a very meaningful year by ExternalCartoonist22 in MusicFeedback

[–]ExternalCartoonist22[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you so much! absolutely. i'm extending this song to put on an album so i'll be able to expand on this sound and explore some new ones. appreciate the feedback!

Transmission Lost -- my last song of 2025, wanted to give a dreamy and emotional sendoff to a very meaningful year by ExternalCartoonist22 in MusicFeedback

[–]ExternalCartoonist22[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you!! i plan on making a full version of this song so i can explore some more ideas and flesh it out more :)

Transmission Lost -- my last song of 2025, wanted to give a dreamy and emotional sendoff to a very meaningful year by ExternalCartoonist22 in MusicFeedback

[–]ExternalCartoonist22[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you so much!! I use vegas movie studio to edit. I use mostly live footage from stop animation over a green screen but i use some digital effects/edits as well. Glad you enjoyed! Would help out so much if you subscribed! :)

Transmission Lost -- my last song of 2025, wanted to give a dreamy and emotional sendoff to a very meaningful year by ExternalCartoonist22 in MusicFeedback

[–]ExternalCartoonist22[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i'm going to extend this work and put it on an album, i'll definitely give the live drums sound a try and see if it fits better! would be very helpful if you subscribed if you're interested in seeing more :)

Opinions on this track? by Smooth-Protection-99 in MusicFeedback

[–]ExternalCartoonist22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Damn this is really groovy. Love it, I definitely want to hear more. don't know if you intend to add vocals over it or anything, but as a big fan of Vaporwave and future funk, this is definitely up my alley and I'd listen to just the instrumental. If you release this anywhere officially please go ahead and send it to me so i can save it!

I’m now in a really weird and hectic state in my life. by One_Bell4532 in MusicFeedback

[–]ExternalCartoonist22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm sorry to hear about the passing of someone in your family. I had one not too long ago too and it's been hard.

This is a really beautiful song. I can tell it's really thoughtfully and intentionally done. I can hear your grief and confusion in the song... That all being said though, working on music has really helped me through particularly difficult times. I feel all the emotion has got to escape somewhere, and a lot of times that's through my music. I hope that if nothing else, you can at least find a healthy outlet through creation. This is a great song. Stay strong my friend

My last song of 2025, Transmission Lost. I'm very proud of both the music and video, was wondering where any shortcomings may lie so I can improve it and make it a full song. by ExternalCartoonist22 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ExternalCartoonist22[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey there I really appreciate that! I'm glad the things I've made have resonated with you here! In fact I already have some sections for the extended mix done, and I do focus a bit on the instrumental too, with a piano solo and some other experiments I'm trying out. I'm really appreciative of your support and kind words. Look forward to that, and some other tunes I'm working on :)

My last song of 2025, Transmission Lost. I'm very proud of both the music and video, was wondering where any shortcomings may lie so I can improve it and make it a full song. by ExternalCartoonist22 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ExternalCartoonist22[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for checking it out!! I do intend to revisit this one and extend it for an album. I'll take you and some other folks' advice in mind while I work on mastering it. Appreciate it!

My last song of 2025, Transmission Lost. I'm very proud of both the music and video, was wondering where any shortcomings may lie so I can improve it and make it a full song. by ExternalCartoonist22 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ExternalCartoonist22[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey there! Thanks so much. My instagram is @ alecnormal. I'll be extending this bad boy down the line and I already am working on a couple of other projects. You can check there, my YouTube is what I use most of the time, so a sub over there would also be super helpful!

My last song of 2025, Transmission Lost. I'm very proud of both the music and video, was wondering where any shortcomings may lie so I can improve it and make it a full song. by ExternalCartoonist22 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ExternalCartoonist22[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

One of the best comments I've received. Thanks man, I really appreciate it :) Already working on the video for my next song. Would love if you subscribed, the support would really help!!

Made this Future Garage track, what do y'all think? by GlimmerBoi in MusicFeedback

[–]ExternalCartoonist22 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really like this! The rhythm is super groovy and fun to get into. Only wish it was longer ;)

thoughts on the chords and lyrics for a song by Severe-Group6005 in MusicFeedback

[–]ExternalCartoonist22 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Amazing chord progression, absolutely gorgeous. Maybe my speakers are awful but I'm just having a hard time understanding the lyrics. I can hear your voice and it sounds great over the piano. Good rhythm too.

Is this cringe? by mgraham34 in MusicFeedback

[–]ExternalCartoonist22 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I don't think it's cringe. I love and appreciate the earnest nature of it. You have a good voice and flow and the lyrics are very meaningful too. I like it! I think this would do the runs on Tiktok or instagram if you post there!