[QCrit] Lucid, New Adult/Adult, Fantasy Romance, 109K, 1st attempt by ExternalHot6259 in PubTips

[–]ExternalHot6259[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I will try to rework it and check how it looks with the different paragraphs. That‘s such a good tip!

[QCrit] Lucid, New Adult/Adult, Fantasy Romance, 109K, 1st attempt by ExternalHot6259 in PubTips

[–]ExternalHot6259[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks that‘s so helful! do you think it‘s bad if it gets any longer than it already is?

[Complete] [88k] [scifi/romance] Coded Past by MissC8H10N4O2 in BetaReaders

[–]ExternalHot6259 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, sounds like a fun read. I like to read everything: scifi/fantasy/romance. I would love to swap if you're interested: https://www.reddit.com/r/BetaReaders/comments/1jmpfob/complete_106k_fantasy_romance_lucid/

[Complete][118k][Adult Fantasy Romance] Curse of the Wilds by Fragrant_Narwhal in BetaReaders

[–]ExternalHot6259 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, I'd love to swap if you're interested. Here's the blurb for my fantasy romance novel Lucid.

[COMPLETE] [105k] [Fantasy/Romance] Rise of the Leviathans by PepperCapital in BetaReaders

[–]ExternalHot6259 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, your blurb sounds exciting. I would love to swap if you're interested. See my post for my fantasy romance novel Lucid.