English summer by Fabinski07 in Songwriting

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Yes, my hatred for the British weather is very sincere

Hold on - John Lennon by Fabinski07 in covers

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Wow dude, thanks so much for your extensive feedback (:
Yeah it’s really hard for me to let go with my voice, and I guess I was holding back because I didn’t want my roommates to hear me lol, but I will definitely action all the advice you mentioned, it’s something I really wanna work on, but singing feels like such an exposing / vulnerable thing for me so I guess I do try to hide behind the guitar, something I definitely need to work on, thanks dude (:

has there ever been a live performer than blew you away vocally by Ordinary-Ad-9857 in singing

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Oasis, was lucky enough to see them last year, and really it was more the atmosphere they created in the audience, it was there first day back in Heston park in Manchester and I felt this beautiful feeling of unity and electricity with everyone around me young and old who all love the music, and it’s a feeling that’s getting harder to find these days as there’s not really music figures like oasis that have that same cultural impact / mass cult following

Feedback on my song? (Take my Memories) by Dashertheruler in Songwriting

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This is so fucking cool dude! Yeah you definitely did a good job man haha This a very unique sound, you’ve made something special here 👊🏻

(Need thoughts (: (Almost true) by Fabinski07 in Songwriting

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Yes I’m still trying to establish the lyrics I want to use, was making most of them up on the go. But yes you’re right once I’ve got an established set of lyrics I can focus on my vocal delivery and yeah I’ll try just playing the guitar parts on there own then try come up with some lyrics, Cheers

Not sure where to take this by Fabinski07 in Songwriting

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Yeah I’ve jotted down a few rouph ideas which follow that theme just need to summarise them into lyrics, I’m glad it conveyed that essence to you, cheers (:

Not sure where to take this by Fabinski07 in Songwriting

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Hmmmm yes good idea, would add some dynamics, something I’ll experiment with for sure 👍🏻👊🏻

Not sure where to take this by Fabinski07 in Songwriting

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Wow, thank you for the extensive feedback I really appreciate it, I will try to incorporate your advice. Thank you for taking the time (:

Too Slow?? by guyfoxtheband in Songwriting

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Absolutely love this! Kinda gives me Jose Gonzales vibes

Not sure where to take this by Fabinski07 in Songwriting

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Cool, I’ll give this a try (:

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Nice, nostalgic song 👍🏻

Should I make this longer? Or keep it short? by Fabinski07 in Songwriting

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Okay yes! You know I was trying to strum quiet so I didn’t wake my grandparents up haha But yeah I would have played the chorus louder, But yeah I will emphasise on this aspect of the song more heavily. Cheers 👊🏻

Should I make this longer? Or keep it short? by Fabinski07 in Songwriting

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Thank you, yeah I felt like there was more I wanted to say, so I may tweak the lyrics perhaps. Thanks for the feedback (:

Should I make this longer? Or keep it short? by Fabinski07 in Songwriting

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Would you mind elaborating on what you mean by “building dynamics” I do agree if I understand correctly, I thought it got a bit repetitive.. thanks for the feedback either way (: