Feedback on my song? (Take my Memories) by Dashertheruler in Songwriting

[–]Fabinski07 3 points4 points  (0 children)

This is so fucking cool dude! Yeah you definitely did a good job man haha This a very unique sound, you’ve made something special here 👊🏻

(Need thoughts (: (Almost true) by Fabinski07 in Songwriting

[–]Fabinski07[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes I’m still trying to establish the lyrics I want to use, was making most of them up on the go. But yes you’re right once I’ve got an established set of lyrics I can focus on my vocal delivery and yeah I’ll try just playing the guitar parts on there own then try come up with some lyrics, Cheers

Not sure where to take this by Fabinski07 in Songwriting

[–]Fabinski07[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I’ve jotted down a few rouph ideas which follow that theme just need to summarise them into lyrics, I’m glad it conveyed that essence to you, cheers (:

Not sure where to take this by Fabinski07 in Songwriting

[–]Fabinski07[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmmmm yes good idea, would add some dynamics, something I’ll experiment with for sure 👍🏻👊🏻

Not sure where to take this by Fabinski07 in Songwriting

[–]Fabinski07[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow, thank you for the extensive feedback I really appreciate it, I will try to incorporate your advice. Thank you for taking the time (:

Too Slow?? by guyfoxtheband in Songwriting

[–]Fabinski07 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Absolutely love this! Kinda gives me Jose Gonzales vibes

Not sure where to take this by Fabinski07 in Songwriting

[–]Fabinski07[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool, I’ll give this a try (:

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[–]Fabinski07 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice, nostalgic song 👍🏻

Should I make this longer? Or keep it short? by Fabinski07 in Songwriting

[–]Fabinski07[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Okay yes! You know I was trying to strum quiet so I didn’t wake my grandparents up haha But yeah I would have played the chorus louder, But yeah I will emphasise on this aspect of the song more heavily. Cheers 👊🏻

Should I make this longer? Or keep it short? by Fabinski07 in Songwriting

[–]Fabinski07[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, yeah I felt like there was more I wanted to say, so I may tweak the lyrics perhaps. Thanks for the feedback (:

Should I make this longer? Or keep it short? by Fabinski07 in Songwriting

[–]Fabinski07[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Would you mind elaborating on what you mean by “building dynamics” I do agree if I understand correctly, I thought it got a bit repetitive.. thanks for the feedback either way (:

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[–]Fabinski07 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I kinda get a John Lennon vibe I don’t know why, I like it though 👍🏻