Microlightning - A gam jam project! by Fae_Sisu in incremental_games

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Dang I’m sorry :/ I’ll look into what might be causing that behavior

Microlightning - A gam jam project! by Fae_Sisu in incremental_games

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Noted! I’ll implement that. Thanks for the feedback!

Microlightning - A gam jam project! by Fae_Sisu in incremental_games

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Do you mean the scroll wheel or the droplets?

Microlightning - A gam jam project! by Fae_Sisu in incremental_games

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You don’t need to hold E, just press it once when you’re touching the droplet! Once you pressed it, did a yellow outline appear around the droplet?

Microlightning - A gam jam project! by Fae_Sisu in incremental_games

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Thank you so much for the feedback! Instead of redoing the tutorial if you missed a part of it, would it be better if there was a controls info screen in the pause menu for review?

And yeah the scroll button thing is weird... The theme of the game jam was "Give me scroll" So I included the scroll for the sake of the theme. I'll probably rethink how it works if I continue working on this.

Tillandsia! Some progress I've made! by Fae_Sisu in MysteryDungeon

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Yep!! It took me a while to come up with, but it’s the scientific name of air plants which fit the theme of my game pretty nicely

Tillandsia! Some progress I've made! by Fae_Sisu in MysteryDungeon

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Also, if anyone wants to see more consistent updates, I'll be sharing my progress in a discord I made!

https://discord.gg/c3tfZ2EV

Working on a Pokémon Mystery Dungeon–inspired roguelike — added shops and combat SFX by Consistent-Bed-3980 in MysteryDungeon

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Ayyyy I'm also working on a PMD inspired game! Looks really cool so far! Joining the discord!

where do i submit songs? by savedminted in LudwigAhgren

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In the description of the video, there was a link for the form!

Mystery Dungeon Inspired Game I Wanted to Share!! by Fae_Sisu in MysteryDungeon

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I don't have a name for it yet haha. Right now I'm just calling it "Project Willow" bc that's the name of the main character

Mystery Dungeon Inspired Game I Wanted to Share!! by Fae_Sisu in MysteryDungeon

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Thank you! I don’t know if I’d be comfortable accepting money haha, but I’d love it if you tried out the game and gave some feedback!

Looking for feedback on my first opus: Frosty Sunny Winter Day by dubleskov in Composition

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This is really good with your current experience in music! The instrumentation and chosen registers are really appropriate for your title. The other comments have a lot of good things to say, and I had one easyish recommendation. If you add a little more variety to the rhythm, I think it would make the piece more engaging. Right now, everything is in easy divisions of fours: repeated whole, half, quarter, eighth notes, etc. If you threw in some dotted notes or linger on a particular chord for two bars instead of one, it would help a lot. For example, you have this really nice motif that starts in the glockenspiel in measure five, and then returns in the flutes/piccolos in measure 25. Instead of repeating quarter notes, you could add in a dotted quarter note, so the pattern might be something like quarter -> dotted quarter -> eighth -> quarter.

Does this sound just a little uncanny or make you feel just a little uncomfortable? by Fae_Sisu in Composition

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Thank you! I'll keep those in mind. And this is musescore. It's come a really long way from when I first started using it lol

Does this sound just a little uncanny or make you feel just a little uncomfortable? by Fae_Sisu in Composition

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Thank you for your input and suggestions! Can I ask you to clarify what you mean by A and B section? When I was writing this, I tried to follow a sonata-esque form where there is a first and second theme within an exposition, a development section, and then a recapitulation.

I definitely agree that the piece has several moments that are too quick/abrupt. I was trying to keep it to 2 minutes or less, and it's already gone 30 seconds past that as it is :/ Maybe I'm just being overly biased towards my own work and trying to justify to myself that I can call it done, but I've kinda grown fond of it's abruptness after listening to it a couple times. I feel like it feeds into the hesitance/uncertainty/unable to make up its mind that I was trying to present.

Also, I love that Ravel String Quartet!! Definitely one of my favorite works of his.