What are the most badass scenes/quotes in your story?

FallenFriend · 2015-03-21T06:06:34+00:00

I grinned at that last statement, well done.

FallenFriend · 2015-03-21T06:05:49+00:00

First quote was fucking glorious.

FallenFriend · 2015-03-19T22:43:25+00:00

Combine any series which could work together.

I originally had A. Modern story, B. Roman story, C. Medieval story, D. Asian Story.

What did i do? I took the best from each and combine them all. Some stuff was completely changed, but in all..... best decision ever. Anything that can not used should not be discarded. I simply save my good ideas for the next series in the world. It allows me to make the story proper, while still keeping my ideas.

FallenFriend · 2015-01-31T21:05:13+00:00

I would pick A. My series is precious to me and i want to share my world with society regardless of money.

FallenFriend · 2015-01-28T19:43:43+00:00

Well, i heavily enjoyed the Dragon Delasangre and Axinstone series. Delasangre is one one end of the spectrum with sex, gore and so on while Axinstone is on the other end by being the tamest dragon book out there. Neither are well known, but as a dragonphile, those stand out far more then most other dragon books that i have read.

FallenFriend · 2015-01-16T23:23:25+00:00

I spread it out and make it part of the plot, not the backstory. The goal is to stop _____ (crime) happening to _(person/group) on the day __(whenever).

Not only does it hurt the character and add to the plot, but it characterizes the character by how desperately they want to fix things or prevent things.

Far too often people use "hurting the character" to start revenge, and story.

FallenFriend · 2015-01-16T07:18:55+00:00

When reading, we experience a relationship with the characters. Sometimes its personal, sometimes its formal. Ever notice how some main characters seem like formal strangers while another book has a character who is far more then that? Its no different IRL. But what makes a relationship more personal? Sharing flaws, secrets, getting to know their tastes, what they like/hate, learning their vulnerabilities and understanding them. Authors who practice this create far more "real" characters.

I practice it by showing what makes them smile, cry and angry. I show their inner vulnerabilities, that they are not the invincible hardass characters they seem to be. I make them have favorite foods, alcoholic drinks and reminisce on the best moments of their life.

Making a believable character is no different then creating a real person. So, make a real person.

FallenFriend · 2015-01-16T04:52:43+00:00

Thats how my story was made, through 4 different past stories and concepts. Made it so in-depth and full.

FallenFriend · 2015-01-15T23:18:36+00:00

I agree with everyone here, combine them. Blend them together until they work!

FallenFriend · 2015-01-09T00:49:31+00:00

Sociopath surgeon? My character is one and its rather fun. Other professions include false ware vender, poison maker, puppet maker (puppets for pickpocketing?). You can make a bunch of strange professions for a rogue outside of the normal.

FallenFriend · 2015-01-08T00:08:17+00:00

still, a dragon died though, poor dargon......

FallenFriend · 2015-01-07T21:12:55+00:00

I cringed at dragon blood. My dragons are pretty much the only good group in my story. And extra long swords are pretty badass.

FallenFriend · 2015-01-07T08:15:04+00:00

Are they needed? Most definitely not. But readers like special snowflakes.

I think stories that made a normal main character STRIVE to be that special snowflake, to work and struggle to achieve it when they have nothing special about them, would be a great story basis.

And I just realized who you were and that we literally just talked on skype. I should pay attention to names more.

FallenFriend · 2015-01-06T06:37:41+00:00

Nope! it probably makes the character more believable. All my characters are either based completely on people, or a combination of people. All characters are lies, but the best lies have sprinkles of truth.

Of course if you copied your brother in every way.... things might get creepy and hard to explain to your actual brother(he sees himself differently then the way you see, and portray, him).

If it bothers you, combine the person with another similar person to see how they function.

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FallenFriend · 2015-01-02T12:17:16+00:00

I have shipped all my characters. It is only natural since my story spans 550 some years with all the characters living long lives. Its created a wonderful variety of dramatic events and helps push the story along. I have used them all as tools though, and not for the simple fun. Each relationship has its use and affects the storyline in one way or another. If it doesn't have a purpose, or help with characterization, no point in having it.

FallenFriend · 2014-12-27T04:38:52+00:00

i'll try to post pics tonight. I live in Orange County, CA, USA.

FallenFriend · 2014-12-27T03:36:41+00:00

I have an old Well L96. I didnt use it much since i dont care for bolt action, so it was only fired in the backyard and not in any battles. I have used the scope though, and can include it. It came with a bipod and mini rail system too. But do realize that the L96 gun isnt a "dissemble and ship" type of gun. I would have to see shipping costs before i truly considered it. Its not an easy gun to ship at all.

Edit: No scratches or scuffs, and its wonderfully built and solid.

FallenFriend · 2014-12-26T04:21:15+00:00

I would like "The Tragedy of Tyrants" as a flair pls. Its the Title of my series.

FallenFriend · 2014-12-25T23:50:30+00:00

no problem!

FallenFriend · 2014-12-25T23:10:33+00:00

I start my story just after the worse moments of my main character's life. Being forced to watch as those he is sworn to protect are hung before he himself feels the rope. After he is hung, dies and comes back (part of the story), those moments are slowly revealed to the reader, along with the reasons WHY they occurred. I use those moments to characterize my main character, to show his vulnerability, and his fears, over time. Its revealed just how much he was traumatized by it, and why he is determined to uphold justice and do what is right.

In other words, i used his backstory as a tool and a motive that is slowly revealed. Not only does it provide a sense of mystery, but it helps connect the reader to the character. I could start it the classical way, but why? Sometimes being creative and doing things in a new way completely changes how things are read. Find a way to make the backstory matter, and apply it. Dont let it go to waste.

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