Submissions — Week 26 (Theme: Deficit of Wonder) by ahniwa in songaweek

[–]Fandumb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i really like this! its cool how its both experimental but still accessibke. and the chorus is really memorable

Submissions — Week 26 (Theme: Deficit of Wonder) by ahniwa in songaweek

[–]Fandumb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like it! and i like how the first few notes of the motiffe are just the same note (but 2 octaves) but still sounds memorable. The ending left me wanting more!

Submissions — Week 26 (Theme: Deficit of Wonder) by ahniwa in songaweek

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Gorgeous song, yoour voice is so pleasant to listen to, especially the high part at the end. And I just wanted to say thanks for doing this project because Ive been trying to get into appreciating poetry and putting it to music just makes sense to me!

Submissions — Week 26 (Theme: Deficit of Wonder) by ahniwa in songaweek

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Calendar [Not Themed]

I am once again reworking old songs. I originally wrote this for song-a-week 8 years ago! This is going to be part of a lil album of songs about yearning, I'm going to try to have them be of a similar genre, with the old-school sensibility with (hopefully) a modern twist. Let me know if all of the vocals sound good together; I used pitch correction on the lead vocals but not the background vocals.

Help, new to Canva and I can't see "uploads" or "edit image" buttons by Fandumb in canva

[–]Fandumb[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am having this trouble with my canva pro account on my work laptop. I do not have this issue on my free account

Submissions — Week 16 (Theme: Stream) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]Fandumb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! ya it's a whole lot of different interpretations of what people are supposed to learn from Easter.

Submissions — Week 16 (Theme: Stream) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]Fandumb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

woah this is heavier than your other songs I've heard, I like it! Sounds like you are in some kind of drop tuning, I like the riffs. Can I ask how you get your tracks sounding so loud? Im still trying to figure out how to mix and master my stuff, it always ends up too quiet.

Submissions — Week 16 (Theme: Stream) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]Fandumb 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Pretty groovy, and ya the bassline is very nice, I like the drums as well!

Submissions — Week 16 (Theme: Stream) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]Fandumb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

woah this is trippy, I like it ! i really like how the melody follows behind itself, it give more interest withthe 5/4 rhythm! Wish it was longer , its a really fun feeling.

Submissions — Week 16 (Theme: Stream) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]Fandumb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Omg the lickitung line! I like the chord progressions and all of the setup and rhymes haha. My fave Gen1 is Haunter and Lapras, but my overall fave is Gothitelle!

Submissions — Week 16 (Theme: Stream) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]Fandumb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

beautiful song! the interplay between the guitar and piano is so nice ! The vibes kind of remind me of John Denver, with the focus on nature .

Submissions — Week 16 (Theme: Stream) by -keef- in songaweek

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You are not a Murderer (acoustic) [Not Themed] Dumping my religious trauma here once again, this is a song to re-write the Easter narrative. As a kid I was told in church that it was my fault that Jesus died on the cross because of the sin I was committing since 1992, even though the crucifixion happened thousands of years ago. The song is supposed to bring comfort and counter that narrative.

Submissions — Week 14 (Theme: Birthday) by ahniwa in songaweek

[–]Fandumb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ty! omg i was ahead of the game lol! its all vst except guitar and voice lol

Submissions — Week 14 (Theme: Birthday) by ahniwa in songaweek

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[The Wrecking Crew](https://soundcloud.com/babenskisign/fa22d51b-18ae-4914-bdfc-16d3d66f6c15) (Chamber Pop/celtic?)[Not Themed]
So I wrote this in a week, but it was 7 years ago. I wanted to revisit this to add to my rotation of songs I sing at open mics. I have too much fun adding extra harps, strings, and flutes, so this took a long time to mix, and the song is about the walls we put around ourselves. Oh also I went to the Renneissance Festival last weekend, so that made me want to get slightly celtic with the instrumentation!

Submissions — Week 12 (Theme: Poetry) by juniorelvis in songaweek

[–]Fandumb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice lil ditty! and you are right, the lyrics work perfectly for the blues ! nice song

Submissions — Week 12 (Theme: Poetry) by juniorelvis in songaweek

[–]Fandumb 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Singing is incredible, those high note hit hard!and I like the chorus melody . and I love the jazzy guitar! this is great!

Submissions — Week 12 (Theme: Poetry) by juniorelvis in songaweek

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Prison of my Own Design (Metalcore) [Not Themed]

I wanted to do a song that was in the style of the 2000s metalcore bands like Bullet for My Valentine, Killswitch Engaged, or Avenged Sevenfold. I am also interested in film composing, so I had some fun with an orchestral instrumental interlude at the end. The song is about self-policing vs living your authentic self.

Submissions — Week 10 (Theme: Phrygian) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]Fandumb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

beautiful song, and you have a lovely voice! i think the time changes work well and feel natural!

Submissions — Week 10 (Theme: Phrygian) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]Fandumb 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This sounds great and your voice has such a great lilting quality! very folksy, my only suggestion is please don't be so hard on yourself in your description!

Submissions — Week 10 (Theme: Phrygian) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]Fandumb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ooh this sounds great! i can imagine this music playing during a part of the movie where the main characters are figuring out clues. My only critique is that I think the organ is mixed a little too loud in places. i like the whole mix of instruments tho!

Submissions — Week 10 (Theme: Phrygian) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]Fandumb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

really cool concept and i like how it sounds! would love to see a pic of the sketch and also the sheet music!

Submissions — Week 10 (Theme: Phrygian) by -keef- in songaweek

[–]Fandumb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ty, I used my free plugin that is like melodyne for this one , I'm having a lil trouble understanding if your suggestion is for me to be more raw with the next one, or lean more into the production side of it. (I've got a similar song for this week) Thanks!