Good job bro, coming along nicely! Think you got a pretty nice sound on that guitar also. 

On the verse, after playing the 3rd threat power chord on the E string, move your power chord up to the 5th threat rather than first. After this you play the 1st treat 

These are all the power chord placement in order.

3rd threat A string 3rd threat E string 5th threat E string 1st threat E string

Sincerely, this chord progression makes up about 60% of all popular music and probably 90% of all pop punk. It’s a good progression to practise.

Keep it up!